You wasted years for this? Kill yourself.

Nice job with this chapter. Looking forward to seeing what happens next with the Chaos Program.

And Kairi is now safe on Destiny Islands. I like your personal take with the mayor.

That bit came from the KH manga? I need to reread that.

I DIDNT KNOW IT WAS YOUR BIRTHDAY! I NEED TO MAKE YOU A PRESENT!

Poor Lucky and Kai...

Ooooh, I like what you did with the islanders! Kairi's new mom seems particularly interesting.

Actually there was another line in KH2. "I am you." I think it's actually implied that Sephiroth is similar to his Advent Children version where he is the dark memories of Cloud manifested so only Cloud could defeat him.

Wow. That's quite a description of the fall of Radiant Garden.

I feel sorry for all those people.

Man, Xehanort was brutal with Kai there.

Ooooh I think I saw the MoM

I'm sorry if what I wrote threw a monkey wrench into your plans. I was only trying to help.

It was nice that Kairi was allowed to visit Kai. I did notice a typo when Insetto was helping Kairi fall asleep. She said passed when I think she meant past.

Oh, dear. Looks like things are starting to heat up. And we all know what's going to happen next.

The reunion between Kai and Kairi is heartwarming which seeing them briefly talk with each other as it's always satisfying seeing Kai putting Ryu in his place.

Well, it looks like the Radiant Garden arc is coming to a close and those last words uttered by Xehanort it leaves a chill down my spine which has left me intrigued to see how things are going to go downhill

Another fantastic chapter as always! It's going be intense seeing the downfall of Radiant Garden happening within the next few chapters. Keep up the excellent work with this story!

Uh oh... The RG arc is coming to a close.

It's always great seeing a new chapter of this story. Its made my day seeing this fic getting updated.

I feel sorry for Kairi. It's clear she's scared and at least she has Lucky to comfort her. The scene with Damphir's debut had chills running down my spine.

My favorite moment in this chapter has to be when Kai attacked Damphir in the battle. It's satisfying seeing Damphir getting his comeuppance.

Another great chapter as always! I'm excited to see what you've got in store for the rest of this story.

Wow. Things don’t look good for any of the characters. Can’t believe Dhamphir was going to try that on Kairi

aww, poor Kairi. But at least Dhampir got his just desserts

Whoa, this is the beginning of the end for Radiant Garden. I love the fact Kairi wasn't scared of Lucky, though I can't help, but feel nervous for both Kai and Kairi.

I'm eagerly looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next.

Dhampir sounds sooo cool! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Great. Now you made me even more worried for Kai and the others.