*drowns in an attack of fluff* agalebdodnaobsoe. XD this is AMAZING! -Cat.

awww... It's so adorable!

Loved it very sweet

yes i love him too! this is awesome amazing brilliant! love it! more please

Could you turn this story to Rated M please...I mean there's still the plot but you add the good stuff here and there.

Loved the ending :)

O my god this is perfect 3 I saw the movie yesterday and immediately loved Jack/Elmont.. also the other stories out here aren't that good, but this one is really cute. :D Signed up just to say how great this was.

Yes, perfect, exactly what I wanted to read. So cute yet sexy. Short, but long enough to get the point across. Great job keep up the good work.

First of all thank so much for writing an Elmont and Jack fic. I've been waiting so long. Finally. I
I was a bit worried about the grammar and spelling at first but the story caught my attention as it progressed. I was squealing at the various and original plot twists. Omg i never would have thought of that, I mean of course Elmont is THE. Knight in shining Armour. For Jack. although I dont quite agree that he is princess like but it is the irony that counts. That was a bit ooc. Finally thank you thank you its nice to know other people are shipping Elmonterey Jack :D you have indeed made my day :D please keep writing.

Excellent so far, I just saw it today and I agree that Elmont was my favorite character. This is the only story I could find on this so please continue! :)