The story overall was pretty good, but the romance was decent at best. It was completely and totally contrived. Also, the relationship was progressing extremely slowly if after 6 months, Sabina still couldn't handle Alex appreciating her being in an extremely alluring position. It's not like he was a stranger leering at her or anything. All of the "romantic" scenes were extremely awkward.

Enjoying it sofar. That sabina part at the end of 3 was nice. Liked it

Hey, this was a seriously awesome story! Would love to read what new stuff you can come up with!

Follow your own wishes, that's the best way to write... this story is fast flowing, heart breaking and heart making. Pure genius in my opinion I absolutely adore it!

I understand Sabina being angry but she wouldn't break his phone. She would wait until he got back and bitch slap him.

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Your story is brilliant. I just finished it, and it ranks in my top 5 fanfictions of ALL TIME. I loved it, and I hope you write more amazing fanfics like this one. Cheers.

Undoubtedly you should do another story of Alex Rider. I'll be waiting anxiously.
Albany.

Yep! Return for another alex rider story! Please! It doesn't need to be related to the other one! just write _

I would have in it a little more Alex x Sabrina romance. Not saying that I hate the adventure, but just a little more romance to some what balance the story if it is somewhat like this story. Mainly necause there is very few AxS stories that I like.

Honestly dat was just absolutely brilliant. Every chapter was awsome. I never got bored once. U have wat it takes to become a wellknown author. If any reviews say dat it was rubbish ignore dem. it was excellent

De only thing wrong wit all de chapters is de spelling mistakes. Just watch out for them. Otherwise it's all excellent

Darn! I thought this was like a sequel or something _ I really liked this story and it is one of the only few long run ones I have stuck with or one of the long one runs that attracted my attention so far into the story so I'd like to compliment you on that. Sadly I'm not really into the fandoms of your other stories but ill wait for one which I know of to pop up!

your welcome, actually thank you for writing such a great story, i will be following your other stories as well

I came across this awesomr and i nver let it go. you have done a great job but i still thought that the action scenes could have been more developed :) A big thank you to the endless entertainment you brought to me... I appreciate your hard work. Its a bittersweet moment for me as this fic is at an end. Continue to be awesome