wow, that was amazing! I love your idea that river is telling Ania and Charlotte this hole story! I don't really know what to say about this story, just that it was amazing! Thank you so much for uploading it!

Here for read #6. This story has become a sort of fan fic comfort food for me. Thank you so much for writing it. I know that you likely don't see reviews anymore because it's been so long since you've written but, on the off chance that one day you decide to log in again, I want you to know how much I appreciate the time and energy that you put into this.

Great idea and thanks for writing and I liked how you wrote River in this story.

Back for read number 5 lol. There's just something about this story that I can't get enough of. Well done!

This story was amazing! I just read it all in one hit, and it was one awesome rollarcoaster ride. I loved reading this story. I can really see all of that happening in the show. It is such a well written story. Brilliant!

Honestly! Such a great fic. Happy to finally have read a fic where I could empathise with and appreciate River as a character. I was not a big fan of her in the series- there was too much missing there, but your story really made her into a great character.
Thank you for your work!

Eish, epic saga. Love River Song. I once tried to make a time-line for her, mostly succeeded, but with a headache. Love the POV and your interpretation of her thought processes. Nice world away from the Doctor and what she does when she's not with him. Love the family feels. Only critique is that some words are missing and spelling off in the later chapters, it marrs the flow slightly. Thanks for this! :-)

Fantastic story! I loved it! I couldn't stop reading it, I like how you threaded all of River's life together to make everything make sense. I wish there were more that you could write in between.

This is such an amazing read, my second complete read through actually, the first before The Husbands of River Song. I'm glad in a way you haven't touched the story, but with the release of River Song's audio books and the Christmas special, I'd love to see you incorporate these things into this story. River Song is my all time favorite character of the series, and besides Moffat himself I can't think of a better writer to do it. Best of luck in all your future writing!

Best interpretation of River thus far. To be honest, I absolutely hate first person stories because I think that they're too narrowed in description. you, good author, orchestrated it so well that I let that fact go and read it fully to end. This story is masterful in it's storytelling and delicious to read. Great, great job. Good luck on your other stories.

I'm not typically a reviewer (mainly because typing "love it" a zillion times feels redundant) but I had to let you know...I'm starting this for the 4th time. I adore this story and (obviously) keep coming back to it over and over. I've only ever found one other writer of fan fiction that I did that with. XOXO Infertile Myrtle P.S. Love it lol P.P.S. I'd love to see some out takes. Otters, 24 years of Delarium nights. Just telling you so that you'll know you would have at least 1 reader, if the Time Traveler's Life bug comes biting again

I. Love. This. Story. Thank you soooo much for writing it! I kind of wished you wrote more original stuff in the middle though, instead of just following the TV series. I absolutely loved your original material and wished it had been a bigger part of the story. I know you said it in your last author's note, but are you going to update the story once the Christmas special is released? That would be awesome.

I've not read chapter 33 yet but I just wanted to say- I'm loving the story so far!

"The writing's all back, but I didn't peek."
Oh, Really? Yes, The Doctor exists again, so the writing returning would make logical sense, but how would he know for certain that the writing was back - Unless he checked to see for himself!

This story is actual perfection. Everything fit, I'm starting to suspect that you might actually secretly be Moffat.