Reviews for Undisclosed Desires
JimmyHall24 chapter 1 . 4/19
The crimes people in the US gov get away with make Outlaw MC look like Girl Scouts who wanna sell you some cookies.

I clicked on this mainly cause i suspect she is suppose to look like Natasha. Let’s see where this ride takes me. :P
Guest chapter 23 . 4/4
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

UPDATE
Guest chapter 23 . 3/4
LOVE THIS STORY

PLEASE KEEP GOING.
HorrorFan13 chapter 6 . 2/29
Glad she told jax off
Guest chapter 23 . 12/13/2019
PLEASE KEEP GOING.
Missydissy chapter 1 . 9/17/2019
Keep going! Most well developed original character I’ve read in years, published or not. X
bucky-b4rnes chapter 23 . 9/2/2019
I just found this story and I love it. You’re a fantastic writer and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 23 . 8/15/2019
Forgot to say

Don't want Cupcake being a bitch regarding her father and brother.

She will get strength from Jax for courage in seeing her dad.
Not saying she doesn't have strength, She needs a different kind and this strength she'll will get from Jax.
Guest chapter 23 . 8/15/2019
More Cupcake and Fabio Please.

Please keep going.

Love this story.

Hope Dana Visit's her dad and Jax is there with her.
Hope Dana and Jax meet Brannon when visiting her dad.
Intemperance24 chapter 23 . 8/15/2019
u r a slow writer.. but hope u continue the story..
Bjosefine chapter 23 . 7/24/2019
Found this story and practically chugged it down in a couple of days! This is the first good SoA ff i’ve found so far and it’s sooo good! Can’t wait to read more keep it up it’s amazing!
Rachell25 chapter 23 . 7/10/2019
I need more!
autumnriggs chapter 23 . 7/6/2019
Okay, first of all, this story is amazing. I just discovered it and binged it in the last couple of days. You are a really talented writer and I really feel like you’ve captured the SOA characters, which isn’t something that’s guaranteed in ff. THANK YOU for coming back to this story, you should be really proud of yourself.

I am on the edge of my seat here! I thought her convo with Bran was really great and emotional to read. I’m anxious for the other shoe to drop on Dana and Jax, it’s gonna be tough to read.

Can’t wait for you to update! Is there no chance for a sequel? I see so much potential for Dana and Jax’s story. I totally understand if this is the end though, I can see how much work you put into your writing and life is sometimes just too busy. Either way, this is definitely one of my favorite soa fanfics and I’m excited to read more!
Danyele chapter 23 . 6/29/2019
I don't even know what to say... just, please, update soon.
glowoffantasy chapter 23 . 6/18/2019
First of all: great chapter and I loved the conversation with Brannon and the fact that he named his daughter after her!
Second of all: take all the time you need to write this story. I'll be here waiting for the next chapter cause I love it!
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