Reviews for First Kiss
Kind chapter 1 . 7/9
Owwmnn
inuyasha1sasuke chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
I've been searching for some good fics of Madara and Hashirama in their teens, and this is one of the good ones among the few! Thank you!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
aww clueless hashi XD
pinkamena chapter 1 . 2/23/2015
cute
Riya3 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
This was really nice. I like this pairing for the imagery of it, but I've never seen it done at the teenage-age before.
Frau Mannelig chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Aah, Madara touching his lips at the end was so... irunno, cute in an endearing sort of way.

I like this story. I liked how Tobirama and Hashirama were both thinking of something completely different. I'd laugh if Hashirama did end up bringing Tobirama along and Madara is all upset and butthurt about it and he keeps shooting nasty glares at Tobirama. *giggle* But that didn't happen and they had their first kiss. XD So cute.

You do a good job for this pairing. Nice work.
GoWaitInTheCar chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Love!
kiwi chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Daw .w.
SunflowerIce chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
tobirama shouldnt have said anything xD
hashirama would have never noticed, if he hadnt told him xD
well, the manga-flashback of hashirama was interesting, I always had to think of "romeo and juliet" when he met with madara, and now I like this couple even more xD
Fellfire chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
AwwWWww...! That was so A-FREAKING-DORABLE! :D
Blinded in a bolthole chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
While I'm not a fan of Yaoi or Shonen Ai for that matter (which is an understatement), there's a distinct possibility that this actually happened in off-screen canon. After all japanese could easily rival ancient greeks (and even Spartans) in male-bonding and homosexuality, or rather bisexuality (usually among the Samurai).
nagatokun chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
Okay I love this. XD You're making me ship them more, thanks. haha
deletedaccountgone chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I try not to throw around the word cute but - OMG THE CUTE. The fact that Madara would realise the way things are first is totally believable to me.

I enjoyed the interaction between Hashirama and Tobirama and how Hashirama usually LETS Tobirama win when they wrestle. 3
QueenPotatos chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
So Kawaiiiiii !
Can't wait for the FB to be over to read your next hashi/mada story.
(just know that for me, THIS is completely canon mwahaha)