Great and heartbreaking story!

I'm a total anti-hero sap too and this was perfect to me!

This honestly broke my heart. You write so fluent and beautifully. I'm an anti-hero sap as well, which is probably why this wonderful story affected me so deeply.

Creepy but perfect and even sad all the same.

Incredible!

I'm a villain sap too, so I approve of this way too much.

This is so haunting. It's great in that respect.

Everything about this story was absolutely captivating.

I love how dark and oppressive this story is. It's practically smothering me with it's heaviness in the best of way. More or less it was perfect. I will be reading this again, for sure.

Jesus Christ that was heavy but perfect. I could so see Sidious pulling something like this. Poor Vaderkin.

Very well written, with powerful and unsettling imagery.

Oh, this was wonderful. I loved the writing and the emkotion you put into it. You should definetly consider writing more stuff for Star Wars.

The blood scene is creepy, especially juxtaposed with the idea of a wedding and consummation. The line about little darknesses is scary because it's so inaccurate. Padme, inexplicably, ignored major evil. Yes, I know canonically, we are supposed to believe she loved Anakin unconditionally and that she was a woman of integrity and goodness, but really, she was just dysfunctional. The frightening thing is that I can see Anakin being fascinated by the blood somehow. And the line about Anakin finally owning her - dead on.

This is well done.

Ah I really love this. Really really love this. Great job and hope you continue writing for SW :D

Very nice. I loved the depth, the examination of Anakin's darkness even before he was Vader. Thanks for sharing, and I hope to read more from you!