i am a little disappointed that the guardians would give up hope after only two weeks of searching. seems a little too short for me.

but, yeah! second chapter!
i hope you update soon, i' d love to see what happens now. pitch would not only set jack free, because he is of no use for him any more, would he? i guess he enjoys watching the other guardians seeing jack so broken.

I'm loving this story! The way you write really brings out the emotions felt by the characters, especially Jack. It breaks my heart T_T
Awesome job and looking forward to more! _

I liked the chapter but I can't wait for the next one. Don't worry about the wait we all get busy and I am sure you have a life. It was a definite bridger chapter to get you to the next part so type quickly.

*cries* Jack! D:

Poor Jack! More please!

I liked it.

Definitely watching this, and all future stories from you. :3

Will follow your story and I plan on waiting for the next chapter.

Omg please update, I love this so far

more more more more more more more more PLEASE

This is so interesting! I can't wait to see where this goes!

I like it, and I have to say that this specific theme is one I've started to become addicted to :)
I look forward to chapter two!

Update soon I want to see what happens?!

That was a really good start! I hope that you choose to continue it. The way that you described Jack's pain was spot on. Bravo! I hope you update soon!
-Tenebris-

Good job! Amazing awesome fantastic! Piz piz! Update soon!