Just finished a reread and I forgot this ended on such a cliffhanger.
Looking forward to part 2.

Is it a week on Mercury? Where its day is longer than its year

Up until this chapter, I figured Alex’s death would’ve been a suicide due to her being depressed from her family being unkind to her for so many years. But the way you wrote it would work to make The seven-year-old John the way he is now just the same. Or actually better.

I guess the only way mine would’ve worked is if Alex‘s note to John explaining whatever was needed sparked the idea in him

well i guess this battle did escalate to where they needed all those ninjas and now he's summoning rock monkey demons, with Ron out of play or dead, i guess there's going to be lots of dead bodies by the end of this isn't there?

well shit has now hit the fan, broke it, and now all the pieces are gonna start flying across the room...

huh more legions of ninjas keep showing up, is a larger battle about to take place or something? cause I can't see why they need that many ninjas in town just to take down monkey fist who's force isn't that large except the armed gorillas, and Ron is about to go completely and literally ape shit lol

poor Yori hopefully its not too late to save her and in the meantime Ron will finally dish out some punishment after all the shit he's been through, nice job so far

and so the battle begin with the heroes divided

welp i guess the team is over now, Kim flips switches way too easily, i hope Ron one ups her later

shot fired day one in front of everyone, yeah this girl is out to start the drama, poor tara

who the hell are all these new enemies?! it's like a whole new invasion is about to take place in middleton... and Erika is now in scene and on the move

well deus ex barkin saves ron's ass from that troublesome situation and while tara got a score its gonna be pointless once Erika arrives and somehow gains monopoly on him which will be interesting and also monkey fist is also targeting Ron he's gonna be in trouble later

wow so Ron is now the true center focus point of opposition to their plans since Kim is solo and being manipulated and now the synthodrone is gonna jump ahead of all the other girls sucks for them nice spin on that, great job so far

yeah he's in a square of trouble booking his time like that although if he holds off on yori and bonnie he should be ok

huh zita outta nowhere and that now makes 4 girls after Ron and I called it Kim made that gap huge well I guess in her so called new found liberation she went and and had sex with her bf.../cousin