That. Was. Hilarious!

Please update your story, you really capture each personality better than any other fanfiction! I've been dying for the next chapter please update! I know it's been a year, so I understand if you may have gotten bored or tired of writing, take care in life ️

I am totally in love with your story, and I hope you'd continue to update it! ️

Love the way you write this story.
Chapter 22 was my favourite.
Looking forward to the next chapter!

This is hilarious! Mostly because this was what was going on in my head while playing the game! Keep up the good work :)

Well... I'm glad thats been pointed at. It's the question many people have asked before, will you pick the person you love or the person who love you. Whatever the case I vote for curtis to win this war!

Oh my freaking God! I'm dead! My heart couldn't take it any longer! Urgghh I'm so stupid throughout the game I never remembered that mystery caller until the post game! I thought rosa would never have a romantic relationship with anyone unlike the first game where hilda and N are really you know... but man imagined my surprise! I noticed that this pairing is not really well known. I thought N was the handsomest thing ever and then this curtis showed up! Man I fangirled so hard! rosa you lucky girl!

Though I like where this story is going rosa's family background intrigued me the most. Does that mean rosa is a child of the new champion in sinnoh.. woah this sure is something.

As much as I root for rosa and curtis I noticed that they're relationship is going on fast paced I guess. Is it only in rush of a moment or a very sincere confession.. I don't know..

Although I came across this story awhile back, I'm really glad that you're still updating! This is the only story that has grabbed my attention and fueled my feels for the pokeships :'D
It was funny reading the interpretation of Pokemon games in your story: Entering people's homes w/o no one caring or not being able to take the extra Pokemon (especially that Deerling chapter). XD

As for the beginning chapters, it was also interesting how you portrayed Hugh's character. Although he has his moments, it's realistic given his circumstances from the game. I'm excited to see how his character changes for the better as the story progresses! Hugh needs to step up his game. But I'm not sure how that will go after Rosa's declaration of independence (from Hugh), lol.

I also liked how you included Rosa's conflict with her family (instead of her having only love problems). Plus, it gives more insight to Rosa's past with Hugh and how they became friends.

Not going to lie, but the livecastershipping moments were cute. Here I am thinking when/how will Rosa find out Curtis' identity. And then, bam - one chapter later, the question is answered. Hopefully more questions will be when more chapters come! :)

Anyways, keep up the good work! :)

I love ur stories

As much as I love Sequelshipping, I gotta admit, livecastershipping is growing on me :3 anyways, keep up that good work! Looking forward to the next update!

Well, at least I got some slight DualRivalShipping in this chapter! And more importantly, news about you. It has been almost a year by now! I hope you are doing fine because... man, I was already mourning your hypothetical death.

Good to see another chapter up! You should be aware that I am not here for LiveCasterShipping exactly, but who cares? It was perfectly written nonetheless. Besides, Rosa will not get over Hugh, that is a fact. I will keep living my life as though she actually did not consider the idea of forgetting her crush, and I will celebrate your unexpected comeback instead.

Thank you for giving a sign of life! Glad to read from you :)

Now, excuse me. There is a bottle of champagne moaning out my name.

Lovely chapter!
Thank you for sharing it :)
I loved the Rosa/Curtis bits too! I'm shipping them hard, so please no Curtis/Rosa/Hugh or triangles~ (though I confess that I would love the drama as much xD)
Cheerful,
Hanna

I'm liking it! I missed your chapters, but the best way to deal with that is put it out of mind. Now that it's back in mind, the freshness of the story is back and exciting!

However, if I were to say one thing about this story, it would be to be careful with Rosa's character. I am not advocating for either Curtis or Hugh, but if she goes back to Hugh after convincing herself so viciously that she doesn't need him, she may appear flaky and desperate for him. Because she is already so determined and has multiple times rebuffed or been rebuffed by Hugh strongly, if she keeps going back to him without adequate reasoning or growth on his part, it appears at best that neither character has learned anything in 30-ish chapters about each other, and at worst a situation of a toxic relationship and mild symptoms of abuse.

I believe at this point that if Rosa is to get back with Hugh, he'd better display some damn good change and reasoning why, because as it stands, he is not a healthy target for the friendship Rosa wants, let alone the romance. At some point, he would leave her, perhaps not with malice, but he would- to pursue what is more important to him now.

I look forward to future chapters and the growth of the characters.

This fic is as dead as my dreams...

I absolutely love this story,not only is it very funny,but its also very balanced with its parts in which it goes from sad to wacky then shocking then WTF. But seriously I hadn't expected Ghosts to be involved with this.

Enough complaining,I'm looking forward to your next update,hope you will Update soon!