| Reviews for Darkest Hour |
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jipseebree chapter 8 . 10/30/2013 WOOOOOOW! That was amazing! I loved it! |
ChucklingDevil chapter 8 . 10/12/2013 Please do not take anything I say/write as a put-down. The plot and concept itself was very interesting and I really did enjoy reading it. But, I have to say that it would have been a lot more enjoyable and less confusing if your grammar were to improve. It was also a tad fast. You could have, perhaps, fleshed it out a bit. But, overall, it was an enjoyable read. |
Bloody-Destination chapter 8 . 7/25/2013 (Sigh) That was a crappy ending. I was hoping for more but if you minus the ending, it was fairly good. |
Someone136 chapter 2 . 6/12/2013 I know that this story is already over, and I haven't read the whole thing yet, but I just want to say that this is an awesome story! This is such a unique idea! Great story! |
Rare Ship Shipper chapter 8 . 5/28/2013 Well, its 1:37 in the morning, I have been reading this since 12:01 in the morning. |
Rare Ship Shipper chapter 7 . 5/28/2013 Wow. You made Pitch look and act like a father! Excellent. |
Rare Ship Shipper chapter 3 . 5/28/2013 Awww, Pitch does have a heart. |
Rare Ship Shipper chapter 1 . 5/28/2013 Oh, its only ch. 1? I forgot theres 7 more! |
YaoiReaderGalor chapter 8 . 5/15/2013 Yeah, not the best ending. I was kind of hoping for a bit more angst from Jack and some fluff from Bunny. Despite that, this story is still amazing. You get a favorite from me if I haven't already given it. :) |
MagicGold34 chapter 1 . 5/15/2013 Why is Pitch helping Jamie, a-and c-c-comf-for-rting the kid?! I'm so confused. READ ON! |
Lookup108776 chapter 8 . 5/13/2013 Wow that was a very well written story. I started reading it expecting to read one chapter then go to bed, hehe I was totally wrong. Anyways... It was a great story and I really like the idea of Tempus I may use his character in one of my future writings. Though the ending could have been better I really enjoyed reading this. :) |
savedbygrace94 chapter 8 . 5/13/2013 i don't care what the ending was just so long as you ended it! So many stories end up posted and left to rot and i love seeing a good story get an ending! Great job with this chapter and with this story in general :) |
KaiFudo16 chapter 8 . 5/13/2013 wow hard stuff to read great job |
StoryTagger2 chapter 8 . 5/12/2013 Nah the ending wasn't crappy, just short and narrative. Not saying you should or shouldn't, but you could fit a epilogue in here sometime of Pitch finally talking to Jamie. |
LrafaelxD chapter 8 . 5/12/2013 Okay weird ending but cool but I really feel bad for Pitch. Even if that sounds weird. But I really do I mean is true that what happens in the other time line happened because of him but still is sad. But it was an interesting story. |