This story was oddly good. I mean, a Doctor, an Immortal and an Angel walk into a cafe... It sounds like the beggining of a terrable joke, but somehow you made it work.

This is a very interesting idea that that I haven’t seen anywhere else.
I really liked this story the first time I read it, but on the second read through while I still like it I also found the story feels a little rushed: with too much telling and not enough showing, maybe? Perhaps you could try adding some more emotive descriptors? I don’t normally attempt to write critical views so I’m not quite sure how to pin down and describe the parts I feel you could improve on in your writing.
I think that your writing could improve but you have really good ideas and the courage to actually post your stories, which is more than a lot of people. So thanks for writing and posting this. Please don’t be upset by my attempts at constructive criticism (unless it is to be offended at the fact I am so unskilled at trying to communicate my thoughts into something useful) I only tried because I think you are already good but that you have to the potential to be better.

Aww loved this. I wish there was more to show adventures and maybe Harry can gain some magic back. But anyway, thank you!

I loved this!

Loved it, but wish it was longer

I want a creepy pet angel !

Also this is amazing

Lol this is amazing. Can you imagine when this gets out to all the aliens? The legends?
'There is a man you must fear who rules over all of time and space and another who walks beside him, his lover, the one who can never die.'
Or even 'The raging storm is the companion of death,beware!'

Hahaha there could even be 'The man of many names who walks beside one touched by death and a fallen angel.' This was fantastic!

And Harry’s creepy pet angel.

Perfect ending! Wish I could have read about Harry meeting Jack and maybe Torchwood so that they could meet “Harry’s creepy pet angel” but this is amazing!

I really loved this.. Super cute. I found a couple spelling mistakes that are easily overlooked

Somehow the angel is my favourite part in all of this.
I can just imagine Doctor introducing Harry to like River and being all yeah this is my friend, he's called Harry. And that's Harry's pet Angel

more more please

Ugh I want another chapter too this ...

And Harry's creepy pet angel. LOL

It was really good! Wanted more u

Oh! I loved, but the really horny Harry was a new one :P I was expecting something more of the relationship between them and maybe an insidht in what happened after, but this end was quite cute too.
Thanks for sharing!