whyyyyyyyyyy no continue?!

Type your review NOT START A FIC IF U CANNOT FINISH IT . BUT ITS OK BECAUSE UR A USLESS HUMAN BEING NO UR NOT EVEN A HUMAN BEING UR JUST A TRASH.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

I knew that this was an older fiction, but I still just haaaaaaaaaaddddd to read it.

A great story, and while I do approve of overall scenario, Shirou not being Shirou (instead Naruto) was the part I least liked about it. However, that is a minor complaint on my part, very minor, as this was a ton of fun to read!

I wish that this could be continued, but I know that after all this time it's probably been laid to rest for a while now, so I won't ask. :p

Of course the last chapter had to end off on a cliffhanger.

Grammar is okay, I guess, but I'm going to top reading here. The flanderization of the Kohona vilagers (he was only pretty much ignored) and Sakura's mom is a dead breaker for me.

Nice lancer n his lover.

Luckily for the situation there is no ambiguity of who is the good guy n who are the bad guys. Otherwise the could have been friendly fire.

With how developed the fate lore is now due to the mobile phone game Fate grand Order there is a lot of potential stuff to incorporate if you so choose.

Hahah Tenten is having front row seat to the event. She could genjutsu the event back to the hokage if he wanted answers .

Kinda poetic. They first met in the previous life from her saving him from a spearman now this.

Oh asuma. The buttmonkey of the chapter. Too bad for him kurenai doesn’t seem to be the type to use a strap on . I really pity him if Anko learns about the incident.

Interesting tale by hayate.

ahahha the duckbutt getting owned. Tenten would probably have her own fanclub now. Pretty sure a lot of the males hate the duckbutt due to his fan club.

Danzo approves . Just love the misunderstanding.

I wonder what type of moves the oc teammates of hanabi have. For a preteen girl to not be afraid of bugs n escape his swarm n to beat neji. Though I guess that one has a similar situation to Sakura in that she is an unknown whereas due to oc’s acquaintance to hanabi, the oc knows more about hyuugas combat style .

Tenten’s Berserk button . Silly duckbutt .

Poor hanabi. Yup hinata is definitely a psycho.

Good job from Ino the innovative thinking of using a kids toy for its devestating effect Though to be fair they yamanakas aren’t much of a combat specialists.

Hm was it more of a mage craft or was it more of a ninjutsu?

Nice interlude.

I wonder what kind of body figure she will have when she reaches adult hood. With saber inside her influencing her metabolism like that.

Ahah. The awakening of th third hokage. Added bonus is lower opinion of trh hyuugas n duckbutt. Less likely to be lenient when dishing out disiplinary actions in the future on them . Dunno who would be punished first, psycho hinata or traitor duckbutt, or minion neji.