| Reviews for Hard Rain |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 4/5 Yeah, Sherlock sleeping with all those people wasn't right. Also, a big problem towards the end; Piyra suddenly disappears. She was at her lab analyzing the samples from John's hand and was supposed to contact him with the results. She never did. Then you wrote that John was going to sleep on the couch, but then you had him go to the upstairs bedroom. Didn't explain Piyra's disappearance. I kept wondering if she had an ulterior motive for living with John. It was awfully strange that the American soldiers were so accommodating. Why was John marked in the first place when they were only marking the homeless? Why mark someone who would be missed readily? I liked that John said he hated Molly because I don't agree with other stories where John is so immediately forgiving of her and Sherlock. I loved how John in barely contained fury explained to Sherlock how stupid he was to leave John behind and I loved how John barely restrained himself from beating Sherlock up. Overall, I liked your story and I didn't like your story. |
| Guest chapter 17 . 1/9/2014 Loving the story. Love the Techie server down war stories bit. So true! Amanda, Australia. |
 Aiamcupid chapter 32 . 7/14/2013 It was ok it kept me intrested. |
| lmnr chapter 32 . 7/12/2013 Congrats for finishing! It seems fitting for this story to end on the edge of a beginning, rather than going further. |
| lmnr chapter 31 . 7/12/2013 Ooh, this story is being updated, hurrah! |
| tardis-blue-jay chapter 32 . 7/12/2013 Loved it! It was awesome! I can't really put into words how... Well that's it I can't really discribe it! Your characterization was perfect, the plot was intriguing and advanced like the real episodes, and the Johnlock... Was really believable! Their actions seemed legit like the characters would actually do. (If that makes any sense) I enjoyed reading this story with all it's twists and turns. Thank you for writing it! |
| Serenityofthematrix chapter 31 . 7/1/2013 Good chapter here. |
| foxeeflame chapter 31 . 7/1/2013 Fantastic! |
| Cora DeBlaere chapter 31 . 7/1/2013 Whattttt? He can't! He had better! I need a romantic tearful reunion with embraces and a confession of love! What is Sherlock doing!? |
| JGHB chapter 30 . 6/30/2013 The angst is killing me, but it's a great story. |
| tardis-blue-jay chapter 31 . 6/30/2013 RIP- tardis-blue-jay. Death by Johnlock and this story. JK... BUT STILL! You can not leave again after this chapter! I mean the Johnlock, and Sherlock, and he, I just can't... Dkffkckdkjdj... Update please! Please! Update! |
| lmnr chapter 30 . 6/6/2013 Sherlock is extremely fortunate that John has this superhuman degree of patience with what he gets up to... please don't forget this story! I look forward to new chapters. |
| lmnr chapter 25 . 6/6/2013 "I need to start lying to John again." This is kind of a devastating revelation on multiple levels, not least of which is what life must be like for Sherlock. Really impressed with the writing! |
| lmnr chapter 24 . 6/6/2013 John's reactions are brilliantly written! |
| TheFarFire chapter 30 . 5/20/2013 Please please PLEASE continue writing this! I don't know where to start with how much I've enjoyed this journey. After bawling my eyes out at the reichenbach fall, I really sunk myself into this continuation with such ease, I really could picture it all happening. I loved the way you captured intimate moments with subtlety, and really enjoyed the plot merging both of their lives back together. Their friendship/love is getting nudged at just the right level of progress, it's not just pure fluff or fantasy. This due care and attention is a genuine pleasure. Bookmarked.x |
