| Reviews for Witnessed |
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Zanzibar1 chapter 2 . 12/23/2014 Uh...Sequel? It seems like this was only the beginning of the story... Unless I'm mistaken. |
Auua Ytjoml chapter 2 . 3/15/2014 feeling a bit short changed here! Update soon! |
buslimpan chapter 2 . 1/6/2014 You two did this great! It was fun to read it! |
princessbinas chapter 2 . 12/1/2013 CONTINUE PLEASE! THAT IS A CLIFF HANGER NOT AN ENDING! I WANT MORE! |
deku'sforeskin chapter 2 . 8/13/2013 AWESOMENESS! Please write a sequel! |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/9/2013 I liked this. A really good theory and I look forward to the sequel. |
sapphire-eyed cat chapter 2 . 8/9/2013 I really liked this and i hope you put a sequel up. |
i-am-casass chapter 1 . 4/17/2013 Pretty good start can't wait for the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2013 Hiya. Finish the story. I was promised a two-shot! |
Blob chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 ... |
Deborahpflover chapter 1 . 3/18/2013 Interesting story! Can't wait to see more! |
Az The Dragon chapter 1 . 3/17/2013 This is... really interesting. And funny! It shows a lot of potential. Yes. Please, continue as soon as you able to (without destroying your social life, that is) |
Danny Phantom Phanatic chapter 1 . 3/13/2013 Oh my God! I love it and it's just the first chapter! Please continue this please please please! It's so interesting and you have Jack's character down so well. An I know you asked for constructive criticism but I couldn't see anything wrong with it. (May be because I read it not as a critic but was too busy enjoying it. Or it could be because there wasn't any) either way I love what's already written and hope to see more soon! |
FReeTOBeMe1311 chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 I love this! Can't wait to see what happens in the 'mysterious' building next |
jeanette9a chapter 1 . 3/9/2013 nice XD |