I was Mega Man X but I had to change my name. I lliked that name too. Nice ending. This stories great. Oh, did you say sequel? Meet ya there. See ya!

I've just started reading fan fics and I'm falling in love with every one I read. This one holds a special spot for me since I love Dark Cloud. I love the ways you portrayed the characters and the way they fight. Not taking turns but working together. Keep going!

very enjoyable just a few punctuation mistakes and gramar aprt from that cool!
I will tell you a secret i have really fell i love with toan and i love to hear positive things about toan and probaily because i fancy him!
get cracking and do some more chapters!
GOOD LUCK!

This is my favortie story in the Dark Cloud section, its so interesting! also well written..please update!

Interesting character that you made Ruby into. (boy that didn't make sense lol!) I like Toan alot, he's a sweet guy. - I hope you continue! It's cool! _

Cool description of the fight between the two guys. _ Hurry up with the next chapter! _ I didn't know that Goro actually thinks. _

I've been waiting for a Dark Cloud fic for a while. Good concept, but you need a pre-reader for grammer and I suggest that you make your chapters quite a bit longer.

Yay, you wrote another chapter! _ Steve is awesome.

STEVE! WAAAAAAAIIIIIII! _ I like Steve! _ I like Xiao too! And Toan is ... _

Yay, I found another awesome Dark Cloud Story! Please update and write another chapter! _

Oooooooooooh... Cool! Please continue! _

Uh... Short but good, write more! *grunts* I lost dark Cloud write as I got to the Ice queen. Sucks.