This is beautiful. I wish I had better words for this. Will you update? You should. You really should.

A shame how delusional Gil turned out, as least so far, but nice story.

This...This actually fits in perfectly with canon. It would explain why Nevy is so angry with Maggie for trying to flirt with Gil, for example. Good job!

Ah, this is eerie and sweet all at the same time. I wasn't quite sure how this ship worked, but now it makes sense and you did a great job with Nevy's characterization. :)