Very nice story. Good work!

This was a well written look at how love can be expressed in a variety of ways. Each of the sections flowed nicely into the next. The agape you showed at the end does not require a happy ending to be what it is, a love that blossoms from our innermost being. Excellent one-shot my friend.

It was worth it to read this.

I am UNSPOKEN...

This *sniff* is great. *drowns in feels*

Loved it! It was a great, short read. I liked the progression of the story, although I had a little trouble discerning who's perspective the story was being told from initially, but then I got it.

Wow! This is great stuff. I found myself tearing up a bit. It moved me. :)

You captured the essence of each level very well. I could feel each stage as your Shepard went through them. Very well done.

Definitely one of the more interesting pieces of work coming from Shepard's PoV. Very descriptive and it kept me wanting to read more. Well done, can't wait to see how you utilize it for your story.

"For you I am not The Butcher of Torfan. I am not the Saviour of the Galaxy. I am simply Carlos."
This was amazing. Simply outstanding. The sentences seemed to form stanzas and the paragraphs seemed to form an ethereal poem that portrayed so much about this relationship. I have to say that the idea behind this story is really intriguing, as is your portrayal of Miranda and Shepard's relationship.
Your greatest strength is how you capture these moments and turn them into poetry. The moment of the piece is outstanding, as is the delivery of the ideas. Emotions are integral to a piece such as this and you weave them superbly throughout the piece.
I also liked how you didn't specify so much on the location or time of each event. You simply allowed us, the audience, to watch and be amazed at the sights and sounds of this romance.
My only comments would be towards the use of "I'm" in the story. A few times I saw you say "i'm", which isn't grammatically correct. Instead, you should capitalise the I.
Other than that minor nitpick, this piece is an outstanding accomplishment. Perfectly paced and executed, I am amazed at what you did here. Keep up the good work!

This was wonderfully written. Excellent work!

this is truly beautiful, thank you so much