That was just wonderful!

This is a simplistic but beautiful story, which has been written perfectly. Also, I'd just like to add, that I found your summary ('person non grata to person of interest') quite witty and I did laugh:)

You are a truly beautiful writer

Just lovely. Perfect characterization, wonderfully written and just a joy to read. Thanks for posting it!

Wow. Unbelievably good. Really superb writing with such intricate, in character, thoughts and spot-on dialogue. Thanks.

Exquisite. What a beautifully written piece. I love your vocabulary, the interspersed boxing moves, her thoughts, his starting that he knows. Just beautiful...I enjoyed this so very much.

Your story was perfect. Thanks for writing.

OMG, I loved this so, so much! You are such a fantastic writer, your words just flow and weave like lyrics or poetry. And you mentioned probably one of my favorite moments that seemed so minor at the time, but I think actually meant so, so much more (from "The Debt"): "She takes a deep breath not unlike the one she'd had when he was "fired," when she'd waited for him to speak then he'd stopped her." It's Kensi's intense reactions and inability to control the way her eyes look or how her breath almost shakes that gives her away. And your story, this little moment in time, shows that to its best ability. Not to mention that Deeks just gets it, gets her. With all her complexities and hang ups. He does humanize her, does make her a better person, just as she does for him. Thank you for sharing.

Beautiful and perfect. Like them. Thanks.

I enjoyed this!

That was beautiful! Oooh I've been waiting for some good Wanted tags. Because seriously, what did they do to us? I loved the workout description mixed in to the flow of the story. And the gentle ending was perfect. Thanks!

So good, but I have one complaint - why is this story over? You should write a follow up to this.

Wow! The imagery in this piece is outstanding. I absolutely love the one about Deeks being Kensi's phantom appendage. Great job.

I liked the boxing references a lot. You're a great writer. Keep going. Peace.

Absolutely brilliant. Just - ugh - no words can describe how awesome this was! The bob n weave of Kensi's internal dialogue was spot on, with a seamless transition to a tenderly perfect Densi moment. I almost wish there was more, but I know it's perfect as it is as a one-shot. Keep up the amazing work :)