| Reviews for The Second Annoying Mist (Original) |
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kaseykasandra36 chapter 8 . 11/7/2019 Pffft GOOGLE CHROME HAHAHAHAHHA |
ACasualHuman chapter 65 . 7/8/2018 muuu, author -san! but okay.. |
Guest chapter 19 . 4/16/2017 The heck she can even go into hyper dying will mode. And apparently she hAS VONGOLA BLOOD IN HER! OH WOWWIE. A PRODIGY AND THE STRONGEST ILLUSIONIST IN THE WORLD TOO! Where are her flaws man? Seriously, this is poop. Lacie's character is boring. At least give her some flaws. It doesn't hurt to do so. Since I haven't finish reading this story, I'm gonna cross my fingers in hope for some character development in your OCs. |
Guest chapter 18 . 4/16/2017 Lacie is a bit like a mary sue. Tragic past and all that rot, able to wield all flames (seriously? are you kidding me?), caught REBORN'S FRIGGIN BULLET, was called cute by Akira (of course. no one can stand an ugly protagonist.) And what the hell? She was able to push back Mukuro from possessing her, acted all aloof and indifferent while her mind was on cake (eh, that part was okay.) and A FRIGGIN FOURTEEN-SIXTEEN YEAR OLD TEENAGER WAS ABLE TO FINISH PAPERWORK IN THREE DAYS WHILE HER "DAD" COULDN'T EVEN ACHIEVE THAT?! What. The fuck. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 iiiiiinntereesstting. (-)-)_0)/ |
Fangirlier chapter 8 . 4/24/2016 What's funny is I'm using google chrome to read this right now. |
Bluerubix-cube chapter 65 . 9/28/2015 Remember me? That reviewer who has an avater of an anime girl with green hair? The one that said "Ok... Nevermind." Along with mentionings about some nightmare inducing pill? Hi. Its been a long time. I'm too lazy to log in. So yeah. I was surprised to see that when I checked out this story, you said you haven't updated for a whole year and that now, you're 15. Time does fly doesn't it? Now, last time... I left this story because of the cross-over and that I find Shugo Chara something foolish (No direct offence to you or your followers). Now that I grew up abit, I came back because I wanted to know how far you've gotten into this story. You could say that the feeling of surprise did roll over me for a slight second. Nevertheless you could say that I, as a reader felt unsatisfied. I really did mean it when I said you had potential. Even if it's just words, you should take it seriously and understand what I mean when I did my job as a reviewer. I want to type more things to you, but I don't the limit of a review for a guest. May we meet again some time in the future. |
Nicole NightLock chapter 65 . 8/21/2015 Thank you thank you thank you! Uwaaah! I cried huhu please update very soon!~ God bless! |
Nicole NightLock chapter 64 . 8/21/2015 Huhuhu please stay! And please update! This story is good! I like where this is going even with the drama! Please update! I also want Tsuna and the others to got to where Lacie is where the school is with Reborn... Please stay with both wattpad and fanfiction! Please update! Story is fine and awesome! And I still vote for Byakuran! |
Nicole NightLock chapter 35 . 8/21/2015 Byakuraaaan!~ |
Nicole NightLock chapter 34 . 8/21/2015 Vote for Byakuran! |
Nicole NightLock chapter 33 . 8/21/2015 I vote for Byakuran Fuckin Gesso! Please please please they match! Onegai! |
Nicole NightLock chapter 24 . 8/21/2015 Waaaah!~ please make Lacie x Byakuran!~ Onegaisimasu! |
DEVIlishAngel00 chapter 50 . 7/13/2015 Blueberry Bliss and Pineapple Konapop, sweetened by German Rock Sugar? Teavana? If it is then where the hell have you been all my life? () |
Nakiso chapter 63 . 7/12/2015 aww, poor LACIE!WAHHH! (No, seriously, I love all of your chappies! even if I coudl do with less curse words...) all of them somewhow made sense! like even going back in time-that was how she gained her skills, right? Sometimes, it gets realyl confusing, it's sorta like you're trying to stretch the story-but it still works! And I enjoy reading it! I just really wish..you won't discontinue it wahhh! Also, I never read Shugo Chara before...so sorta confusing. Maybe explanation? Please keep writing! I really love it! |