| Reviews for To be looked upon as a child |
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Jaal Ama Darav chapter 1 . 5/5/2013 This story was a good read and meaningful. The current ninja era may look bad now, but it was worse during the Warring Clans era, and even worse before the Sage of the Six Paths. Hashirama and Madara had it rough back then, they lost some of the brothers, and had to witness their fathers and brothers trying to kill each other. |
Swirlycloud chapter 1 . 4/4/2013 This is beautifully, simply written. Very to-the-point, without seeming inadequate. You ended it marvelously, as well, and makes the reader think. Well, it struck a chord in me, anyway. There are a few spelling errors, however they are minimal enough to not detract from what you have written. Very nice! |
forgotten-things chapter 1 . 3/8/2013 This was amazingly sad. Like the manga |
madara2 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013 Naruto is the worse manga of all! If you don't like it it's not a problem but don't publish anti-Naruto video! And btw It's Naruto who sucks maybe |
Dattebayo-slave chapter 1 . 3/7/2013 hmmmm... good point. |
Sara Beara Pumpkin chapter 1 . 3/6/2013 Yes. Beautiful. This is good writing. It feels good. And fresh. And come from a thoughtful perspective. Read the latest chapter? Me too. Anyway, this piece of writing is worth looking on your profile to see If you have other stories :) |