Heh. I have not actually read to this chapter yet but eventually I will. I do enjoy what I have read! Plus, I still find it funny how well you got my character! And yes, other people who read this review, it is my oc of Malta my awesome friend is using, not some creepily coincidental identical oc parallel thingy. Well, Malta is out!

Still enjoying this story. But I found it kind of odd that Prussia was annoyed by the books not being in English, since he's a German speaker.

Im confused are they the fem! Axis

Pretty nice story you've got going here. I wish you were a little more original. Meaning, I wish you didn't stick so close to the source material. Also, I believe that,technically, Germany is the youngest nation here,isn't he?.

Holy crap. Just reading along to HetaOni fanfics, when suddenly I here word of my poem I posted like, forever ago. Holy crap.

Dude yes you can totally use my poem. Like, seriously I love you so much I could hug you through this screen. I can't even

Okay...erm, anyways, thanks for enjoying my poem. Hopefully you like it as much as I like your story. XD

See ya next update!

Omg this chapter is so amazing! I need more now! I can not believe you ended it so cliffhangery like that! It is so awesome! I can't wait for- oops I do not want to spoil the next chapter since you already told me a little bit about it.

I love it! The M&Ms part was a nice touch, and I'm looking forward to how that red M&M will be used in the future (the one Yugo dropped on the ground). Next is another fight scene, and perhaps the first time Yugo uses her powers (magic) in front of her friends. (At least, that's how it is with Italy, for me. :D) Great job! Looking forward to more! ;)

Wow. fantastic job! :D But... I'm a bit confused about the last paragraph. It says that "Japan, land of the rising sun" was the one to die in "this room" last, but Japan isn't there. So is this Italy speaking? or Yugo?

Great job! :D I love how this turned out! :) I was wondering what you'd do with "Prussia's Room" when Prussia isn't there. I'd say that it came out fabulously! ;D Keep up the good work!

Amazing job! This is actually the first OC HetaOni fanfiction that I've read. I tend to stay away from them because I like Italy so much, but this one's really good! I think it's safe to assume that Yugo's the one who's made the contract with the journal this time, right? :D I'll look forward to the next chapter!

-SilvermistAnimeLover