Best chapter ever XD. XD. XD. XD

Yesssss! He didn’t forgive them!

I think you should write more, when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

jack you poor innocent little cinnamon roll... you amuse me.

don't think I didn't notice. Harry Evans.
Evans was Lily's madein name.
Harry as in Harry Potter
Harry Evans.
ok . a. bit. obsessed
anyways great job in this!

Dramatic reactions

Please don't delete this fic

I like this but while most guardians wouldn't be allowed to kill i think jack and other season spirits are the exeption to this rule sense the weather can kill

Bunny

You know I just realized while thinking tony would be asking questions about the work shop like "hey how do you run this works shop" and north wluld say " we run off the belief of children" then I thought OMFG it's like there feeding from children's belief hope dreams and memories when did this suddenly go so dark and why did I never realize it

hey...come to think of it i have no idea how i know this stuff i didn't get the talk or learn it at school or by mistakenly read about it or saw a video i think its because reading too many fan fiction but i knew before already
i am a genius XD

I never got the talk, I watched a YouTube video accidentally, so yeah...

are you still going to update this one? we need part 2 ; n ;

Please update SOON. I love your story it's really good. And I give full on encouragement to update it. Please

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

IM SAD AGAIN!