Reviews for One Kiss, Two Kiss, Slow Kiss, Hot Kiss
Gizzy's Mama chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
Okay, I read this out loud while I was home with just my dogs and cat for an audience. You are so very clever! The rhyming was perfect and the story flowed very well. I felt like I was reading a Dr. Seuss book to my son like I did when he was younger but with better characters and plot. Since it’s Dramione of course. I really enjoyed it and can appreciate how difficult it must have been to pull together so well. Definitely a favorite. Thank you for sharing it!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/26/2018
wow!
that must have taken you ages to get the rhyming so perfect
and in iambic pentameter too!
jperks chapter 1 . 7/29/2017
I loved it! Thank you for sharing your marvelously creative story.
KMJeanne chapter 1 . 7/17/2017
This is probably the cutest thing I've ever read
Kyonomiko chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
This is the cutest damn thing on the internet. Like, cute cat videos beware, there's a new game in town
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2016
It's one thing to write a good fic, but to make it rhyme too? Well done to you.
Pharies chapter 1 . 2/21/2016
I was not expecting the whiole thing to actually be in Dr. Seuss rhyme. It was quite entertaining, but maybe not what i should try to read before bed when I'm sleepy.

I can tell it took more work than just writing a chapter. Finding words that fit and rhyme can be challenging.

Great job :)

~Tori
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
WOW YOU ARE QUITE A POET!
plainjane00 chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
.AMAZEBALLS! oh, sorry for using such a silly word. but truly, it was amazing to read that poem. i can just imagine the dedication it took to write it, hats off to you! you did such a great job not just with the rhymes but in how you wove the story. i just love it! i wish i had even just a dash of the talent you have.. keep it up! xo
guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
i love this!
USholder chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
This is really clever and i like it
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Aww so cute :D must have taken forever but I loved it
Firey Phoenix01 chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Brilliant.
mekom chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
This was such a fun poem. It was perfect for Valentine's Day. I am really impressed by your rhyming abilities. I think that Draco conjuring daisies and then crushing them would be more endearing to Hermione than him actually giving them to her.

I am curious how Ron and Harry found out that Hermione was on a date.

I hope that you try more poems in the future. I know that the holiday is over, but maybe a limerick for St. Patrick's Day. :)
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