Love the idea and the level of aggression in Zoro, the only thing was it felt too rushed not enough details.
Maybe put in their point of view.

Wow! This was smoking! I loved it! I think you based this Zoro on the one from the first episode. So it was easy for me to see him acting like this. Haha! I never noticed before but, Luffy is definitely a Twinkie! Lithe, smooth and hairless body? 100% Twinkie! Wow! I wouldn't mind being Zoro's sex slave. He's such a hot buff guy!

( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )

( F ) ( i ) ( r ) ( e ) ( b ) ( a ) ( l ) ( l ) - ( F ) ( u ) ( c ) ( h ) ( s ) ( i ) ( a )

Prison Smexiness yum.!

it wasn't much of rape cause luffy liked it

I realy want a part 2

Love u and all your storys bro! SOOO SEXY! cant wait for more!
XOXO
Silverz

It was a cool story u made. zoro&luffy would make a cute couple.

i loved it! Its like under grand hotel

Aaahhh this was aweesomme

That was vary smexy man lemon. Well done.

that was awesome! The ending was surprisingly sweet, in a wired way...

you should continue this!

Can't wait for more chapters xD

yay! i cant wait for the new chapters!

this is really smexy! /nosebleeds
Zoro is really tough guy! tatt!zoro is so hot
for Luffy i think this would be a very very long 3 months HAHAHA