Reviews for Our Hearts Turn Red
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
So sweet thanks for the read
Ozzie13 chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
This is beautiful. I love how you meld little vignettes together. You are so true to canon and the show, but then you digress just enough to give us what we really wished would have happened. Love, love, love it.
rcfan77 chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
Absolutely amazing! :) love it!
TrustFalls chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Aww!
Really, I'd like to say something meaning- or helpful, but I can't come up with anything. It's just perfect.
The five episodes you selected, the little undertones here and there, the touches and especially the sentences about Jane putting his memory palace back together ("He's in the middle of painting the walls with the capitals of the world") and Lisbon taking off his shoes...wow.
My favorite moment was the one where Jane distracted Lisbon by tugging her into his coat (and her reaction towards it) and one of the phrases I lied best "I'm sorry. It's all he can offer her" because it's so true.
carta chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
This kills me every time. So sweet, so perfect.
judy washington chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
I missed this one, too, apparently. So happy to have rectified that!
"Lisbon's first response is to laugh, because he just used tomfoolery in a sentence, and honestly, who does that anymore?"
Best use of Lisbon reaction to perfect Jane voice ever. Who does that with such ease? Wonderful! Thank you!
Anna chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
Sweet!
ironseas chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Simply beautiful, eloquent. I just love your stories so much, I wished you'd write a tag for all episodes. You always show the reader Jane and Lisbon's feelings rather than tell us.
Phosphorescent chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Emotional and beautifully written.
whovalista chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Omg, omg, omg, omg.

Not only have you written about my favourite episode but you continued it and just made 2000000000000000000000000000 0000000000000000000000000000 0000000000x more adorable than it could of ever been.

I loved"are we going home Lisbon?" but my favourite line was "We're friends. Jane thinks they are probably more."
thank you for this fab story!
Lothlorien Aeterna chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Beautiful. Thanks for sharing it with us :)
Holobe chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
wow...that was really good...beautiful language and descriptions...and enough (no need for more chapters:) )
You really made someting beliavable and in character without using the same words/descriptions as many other mentalist fanfiction often re-uses...and I must say one of the best Mentalist stories I've read here...and I've read a LOT. Keep up the good work!
stxrdusty chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This is absolutely gorgeous and makes me feel so much. Amazing job!
realitydestroys chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !
All-I-need chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
That was really beautiful! Feel free to continue with Season 5, I certainly wouldn't mind ;-)

Thanks for sharing!
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