PLEASE, DO YOU HAVE ANY SOCIAL MEDIA SO I CAN FOLLOW YOU? I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO SPAM YOUR CHAPTER 1 TO DISNEY SO THEY CAN CONSIDER YOUR STORY INTO THE NEXT SEASON. I RALLY REALLY LOVE BARRISS IT BROKE MY HEART WHEN SHE DID THE TERRORIST THING :(

Amazing. Love that Barris is not evil.

Yes, Ive just rewatched the end of The Clone Wars...

Bariss, well, according to Film canon, Bariss is in action in RotS and dies in Order 66...and Film canon takes priority. (Did the Jedi brainwash her like they did Revan?)

I dont believe she was under the Dark side (Though some Jedi might; and remember she did catch that brain worm which I think should be taken into account) her grievances are very real...and ignored.

But SHE DOES BETRAY HER BEST FRIEND

Nothing so evil as teenage girls, eh?

Very impressive story. Very few grammar issues, I am honestly shocked you aren't a native english speaker! My biggest regret from this story is that it was so short. Keep up the good work!

BTW, I agree with zazsissyem or whatever his/her name was

Continue? Soon? Dude,if some miracle happened and ur reading this review, it been 2 YEARS

Sir/Ma'am, your story is amazing. THIS is how it should've been. You, IMO, write better than Filoni does.

THIS is how it should have ended. The necklace was a great idea, and I laughed so much when Anakin locked Tarkin (he deserved it !).

I love the way it's written. I couldn't help thinking to Sidious' soundtrack when Anakin discovered the necklace (don't you think it fits with this situation ?)

Can't thank you enough for writing this! I couldn't stand watching that happen so I tried to think of a way that Barris could have been brain-washed. I thought of the brain worm's after-affects making her more susceptible to dark-side force suggestion, but the necklace made much more sense. Thank you for clearing her name and, most importantly, preserving their friendship!

May the Force be with you! :)

What Anakin did to Tarkin, priceless, hahaha!

Thanks, I'll never watch clone wars in Dutch then.

I'm part Dutch, but I don't speak any and I can't imagine how positively pathetic it must have sounded. Try watchcartoonsonline.

I liked your story and I agree that in the last episode that they completely murdered the character that canon has created for Barriss. She is one of my favorite Jedi (After Obi-Wan and Shaak Ti) and I loved the Medstar books.
However, I must critique your writing (I'm OCD like that).
Whenever someone speaks, you begin a new paragraph:
"Blah blah blah blah," X said.
"Blah blah blah blah," Y responded, codly.
Over all this is a very good story and I very much enjoyed it.

*wanli, the son was killed if I am not wrong:

Wait! There is a problem:(
When barriss battled anakin, she sliced her own lightsaber in half when she force jumped onto him. It is impossible for unduli to give the lightsaber to ahsoka. Unless of course, she fixed it. You should add that she fixed it in that case. There are also a few spelling and word errors. And in the season finale, ahsoka left without meeting unduli, you should say that unduli met up with her AFTER she left and gave her the REPAIRED/FIXED lightsaber;)