Loved the story! I saw you throughout this story and loved it even more.

How did I not know about this story. I love it.

Loved it! A little sad it's a o/s, didn't realize till I reached the bottom.

The best of my faves is when Bella is chasing Emmett because of a marshmallow. That really had me laughing.

I hope you will more some day.

I love these two!

Such a sweet story and your descriptions of life in rural Indiana were spot on . Great work.

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Omg I loved this except the whole fact you made them like IU over Purdue! Lol, sorry how ironic a country loving girl born and raised in Indiana, fan girling county girl found your story! I'm actually the other side of country girls from Indiana in that I hate the stero types! Also that I'm more on the livestock side. I'm guessing their little small town is more in southern Indiana... boiler up (don't hate me I feel like you are an IU fan!) Anyways I love county Bella she's kinda who I wish I could be in a way. Also I feel like Edward reminds me (if he was more country) of a guy in a class last year with me... mmm Edward in Square toe boots... I can't wait to see what you do with this. If you want any help dm me as a day dreaming county girl from Indiana myself I have too many ideas for something like this and I know I probably won't get around to writing them myself. Anyways sorry for my blabbing I loved this and how Bella slide over and held his hand in the cab, because that's something right! Opps so many run on sentences! Can not wait till something more!

Sweet

I'd love to read more and more and more of these two. I hope one day the words come to you! Thanks for this short but awesome story :)

I tracked it down from the contest page, cause I enjoyed it so much and wanted to tell you. So, yeah.. really good reading :)

This was really fun to read. I really liked that Edward was so excited to get to where Emmett is. The friends were super fun. Liked that Bella and Edward were instantly attracted to one another. Very cute way they got together in the end there. I liked it.

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I hope you do more on this it's really good

I don't like this Bella. I don't like chicks like her. She is rude and has no manners. She thinks she is so much better than everybody else. In real life I avoid people like her.

I would really like a futuretake or something if a multichapter story it's not what you want. But I think this storie can progress Ito something amazing, I loved your writing and the personalities of all of them. So think about it please, one maybe two or twenty futuretakes LOL.
Excellent story, I loved it completely