I had a feeling that Mikey would let his true colors show. he doesn't seem like the shy cautious type. Also, that wink he gave Leo at the end made me smile.

I am enjoying this story so far, Hummer.

Oh. My...Goodness!

I LOVED this chapter. It was super cute and Mikey is so innocent...well, at least that is what he is showing Leo.

I can't wait to see the rest of their relationship unfold. i am curious to see how the brothers react to Mikey.

Great start to a wonderful story!

Even though I already know who this "Lost Boy" could be...I am still sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait till we finally get to meet him!

Also, I love how Leo is already enamored by him. I think Leo likes the thrill of a challenge...and this Lost Boy seems like he will surely provide one to Leo!

Can't wait to read more!

~W.K

Very good story. I loved the introspective POV of Leonardo. I lived all the insightful interactions and reactions of everyone. You got all the guys' personalities exactly right, and I especially loved how intense and yet gentle Leo was with Mikey AND how sensitive he was to the rest of the family. You write him as the leader he is supposed to be!

Really terrific storytelling, thank you for sharing your incredible talent!

Amazing! I love it! :D

GOOD OL RAPHIE

WOOOOOOOO
DONNIE IS RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOU! GO TO HIM! GOOOOOOOOO

DUN DUN DUUUUN

Raphael. We all love him don't we? Good ol RAPHIE doing good ol raphie things.

I love your stories! HUGE FAN OF YOURS!

What a fun pairing between the eldest and youngest. And I'm so glad Raph and Donnie weren't left all alone.

Clearly, the worst part of this story is that it's over. :(

Other than that, I can only give you... *clicks off the lights, kicks on the fog and laser machines and breaks out the glowsticks* ...a rave review! Woo! *wubwubwubwub untsa untsa untsa*

Still loving this. I feel like I'm zooming through these short chapters!

getting wailed on, not whaled.

R/s

Loving this one so far in a big way. (When do I not, though?)

Elusive, not illusive. ;)

R/s

Aha! Got to review on this finally. Just want to say that I read this story months ago in one sitting. Very well written. Now that I have remembered this, I had the urge to watch Fist... and Enter the Dragon. Haha.

I don't like to read romance, but this fic was exceptional. A little dramatic (but who doesn't like a bit of drama), but most importantly, I've found myself literally boasting a laugh at several points. The way you've written Mikey, and all the well-played interactions, it was a very enjoyable read.

This was absolutely brilliant! It wasn't rushed, wasn't over the top...just sweet and absolutely lovely to read. Great work!

-Kain

Again with the stalker tendencies? Leo you sound like your turnning into a creepy stalker kidnapper person.