I've re-read this one several times (don't know how I neglected reviewing until now) and every time I can't help wishing things had gone the way you them in this story on the show. I love Emma and Killian's interaction in this one, and how she tells him her whole story and trusts him with her tears. I love that she lets him hold her while she cries, and I love that he willingly allows her to tie him back up again when she finishes - determined to gain her trust. He truly reads her and understands her, and she appreciates his heart like hers in this wonderfully. Great writing! :)

That was so touching and adorable. I loved it :-) x x

*HannaH*

You are must be somewhat evil, murderer. I am dieing of feels here and it's your amazing writings fault snsk\bvhbzunvuzvn

Oh wow, I just laughed this and Emma's raw emotion was fantastic! Thanks for a fantastic ficlet! :)

I still keep holding out hope that Hook and Emma will get together, I mean who knows now that Neal has a fiance, but it will never work out, he's after all from magical land and also from never land. So hopefully Emma will finally get her happy ever after that she deserves.

this was beautiful.

I loved this story. I like how you made them like each other even though they could be enemies later

that was sweet!

I love this pairing!

that was so beautiful.

Love this it really captured Hook i think

Ahhhh, I adore reading your work, I truly do. I had exactly two minor technical nitpicks (for me and my OCD, that's, like, outstanding), and I saw what you did there with that "pulse of energy" thing, and I love it love it love it.

Oh - the one technical thing was "mother lode", instead of "mother load". Don't ask me why it's "lode", but it is.

For the rest of it, you are amazing and wonderful.

I LOVED this sooooooooo much! Like the rest of your stories, this was AMAZING. I adored both you Killian and Emma. I would love for Emma to show her most vulnerable self to Killian. These two just give me so many feels and stories like this only further exploit them ;)

Great job!

That is basically what needed to happen in 2x15/what needs to happen in the next few episodes : a proper conversation between Hook and Emma. These two haven't had one since 2x12 yet absolutely need one. You pictured the problems going on between them pretty well : Emma and her trusts issues, Hook's lust for revenge... But in the end, she's still a frightened teenager who wants to open up and he remains a gentleman despite his darker side. Thank you for filling the gaps!