| Reviews for Mission Interference |
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ancientelemental chapter 31 . 4/16/2018 I was wondering if you were inspired at all by the Teen Titans arc involving Terra when you wrote these parts with Brynga and Dashiel but also with the entire infiltration/spying part of her mission as well. It seems similar between the two pieces of media, now looking at the plots side by side. |
Aelitalyoko99 chapter 36 . 6/25/2014 That was an amazing story! I honestly enjoyed every chapter very much and was always wanting more to come. Can't wait to read your next story! |
Blueblur2000 chapter 34 . 6/23/2014 That was a fitting end to the would-be-tyrant. I liked how Aelita was immune, which kind of traces back to the roots of the show where she could deactivate towers because of Franz/Waldo, now she can avoid the terrors of the items because of him as well. I particularly enjoyed the pure betrayal Victoria expressed at the revelation of Dashiels treachery, as well as the way everyone decided against being nice to Dashiel and tied up the final loose end connected to Dominik. (I think). There are still questions to be answered and I await these final revelations in the chapters to come. Keep moving forward. -A Lyoko Warrior |
Aelitalyoko99 chapter 34 . 6/22/2014 No I don't want it to end! Great chapter btw! |
Blueblur2000 chapter 33 . 6/22/2014 Well I must say you have made an interesting comeback, skills still sharp as ever. Impressive, young one, impressive. I like the way you acknowledged every character's role in the battle during this chapter, unlike other people who would just leave out the ones that aren't so "action-packed". This story is great and the update is much anticipated. Keep it up :) -A Lyoko Warrior |
Aelitalyoko99 chapter 33 . 6/21/2014 Oh my gosh this chapter is just so I can't even think of words to describe how amazing it is! |
Guest chapter 32 . 6/20/2014 I have thoroughly enjoyed reading both of your works in this saga. They have been well-written, tense at the right moments, just as should be expected. I have one question for you: Wasn't the Guardians Ring destroyed earlier? Did Ulrich not stomp first the band, then the stone to pieces after it was freed from Dashiel's hand? I admit to being rather confused to its existence at this point in time. |
Blueblur2000 chapter 32 . 6/20/2014 ACK! You always leave me on the edge of my seat! I can't wait to see how this ends. I'm glad to see Brynga as a good guy (or girl) and I'm nervous to see what Dashiel will force Aelita to do. What's in store for your beloved readers and of course the characters to endure? Also with the reviews, it's my pleasure. You always give me something good to read and involve myself in, why shouldn't I provide feedback? Happy writing! -A Lyoko Warrior |
Aelitalyoko99 chapter 32 . 6/19/2014 Oh wow these last few chapters have Belen's great! (Not logged in cause I've completely forgotten my login credentials) Keep it up! |
Blueblur2000 chapter 31 . 6/18/2014 Ah a bit of a cliffhanger. I love the way you're going with this story. The utterly beautiful and gruesome aspects of the story battle eachother like the characters do, and it makes something so cool. I was surprised at the speed you're updating at, but hey no complaints here. Great work! |
Blueblur2000 chapter 30 . 6/18/2014 TOASTEDCROISSANTS IS BACK! Look at you jumping right back into your fanfics, and being all awesome. I love it! These chapters were great and I love the way you made sure the tension didn't magically disappear and all the bad things weren't forgotten so easily. It was legit. I look forward to more of your work bro, nice to have you back in action. your ever so supportive reader Blueblur2000 |
Just a Reviewer chapter 28 . 9/29/2013 I thought this story was dead! How could you do this!? *sobs* Nah... Just kiddin'. But I missed this story! Ah, a bit gory with Brynga, but eh, written well enough that I wasn't grossed out (too much). AH! Ulumi chat! And poor Odd... He had it so bad... Anyways, good chapter, more please, soon! But get your school work done too! |
Blueblur2000 chapter 28 . 9/22/2013 ODDS ALIVE! This is fantastic! I didn't mind the wait especially with this great chapter you provided. And now I can't help but feel bad for Brynga. -sigh- "She was only doing her job" maybe so... But her transgressions were not lost on Eurasias army (I can safely guess). Even with all that time not writing, you incorporated every important detail from previous chapters. Beautiful. Seeya soon I hope! |
Just a Reviewer chapter 27 . 8/20/2013 Oh yes! I should have read this earlier, but I've been busy. Ah, okay, so Odd might be dead... *tries not to scream, cry, and shake screen till it changes it* And Yumi's back! Yay, I missed her. Poor, poor Brynga, I have this "YOU TRAITOR!" impulse and a "dear you might just need a hug" impulse too. Interesting chapter, it kind of makes you forget the duel by the end. But the whole Herve thing will come back to bite us, I know it. It is a sad day for Eurasia indeed... Well keep writing! |
Blublur2000 chapter 27 . 8/11/2013 Tell me Odd got out! Please he can't die. I mean this was an amazing chapter so detailed so awesome, Yumi returned, the emotion Jeremie portrayed before Odd told him about headquarters... PERFECT! I loved it just please don't kill Odd. PLEASE. |