I applaud another great chapter but some things went wrong when writing it. The seasons nevery really fully explained what was what or who was who or why this was so untill aaround the end and said a lot of things around the start that readers cant keep track off and you never seemed to put the Seasons points on their children in a sentence or thought together. Even if you can keep up, we dont understand it all and havent been untroduced at that point to the others so we cant. Frankly, I hadn't understood who Hana was, why there were 2 autumns, and I couldent tell who's child was who's when refering to Summer and Autumn. I got confused specially with "Seb". You wrote it as though they weren't close at all but then wrote Seb. I guessed it was autumn and becuase it was short for Sebastion or something but doubted myself a lot (as would others subconciously) because by the way they were acting, I dont think they'd use nicknames and because of that the name was just Seb which is not a boy or a girls name. I was not familliar with Summer's name either so I thought it was a boy's just spelled differently in a way (Claude). The vhapter is pretty good though, that one mistake causes a whole mess of confusion and is not obvious to the writer and its worsened because your writing style foes not go into detail when in scenery. Don't be discouraged, keep going. Its comming together well.

OH MY GOD ! F*UCK, F*CK, F*CK, F*CK! WHERE THE HELL IS NEXT CHAPTER?!

*flails*

No! No killing Jack! :(

Thanks for writing & sharing.

This is interesting, can't wait for more!

Please don't let jack die.

Names in native language please!

Mm, personally I think the native language sounds better, but if you want a more...common understanding of it, it would probably be better to use the English names Wow, this story is brilliant! It seemed so lighthearted and fluffy (which it still is) but it's adopted this slightly more serious tone that works so well! I love the different aspects of the seasons: the immortals and the...vessels. It's such an interesting take on the fandom! :D

Oh shit

Awesome! Use there English names

So we are not going to get just one little kid? but four? Ooh boy. But Jack! He's dying! Ohhh man! Hopefully they can do something about that and soon.

And do whatever is easiest for you with the names. I think both versions are interesting.

Ooooh, that is a beautiful cliffie! XD Granted, I will be thinking about it for the next few days, but that IS a nice place to end off!:P

I also love your personifications of the various seasons. It fits! It all fits!:D The suave, cold(no pun intended) winter; the warm but distant spring; passionate and fierce summer; the gloomy but sort of artistic autumn? Hahaha. So apt.

And now I think I'm starting to understand what you meant earlier with the talk about immortality. :3

I have an idea for a spring name, Vanessa means butterfly.

I like the sound of their names translated into their native languages...it seems more...solid that way.

Definitely use the translated names!