I truly, truly enjoyed reading this story! I laughed and laughed.

Excellent. Loving the Caroline's perspective.

I like this different story. Young Priestly following in her step mama's footsteps and not even realizing it, lol.

I really loved this story! Thank you

That was absolutely wonderful!

This is a unique and cute way for Miranda and Andy to meet up again. Plus, an opportunity for one of the twins to know Andy better. I had to laugh at Caroline’s ‘oh, yuk’ reactions to hearing them making love. This is well done and I appreciate the chance to read it. BTW, I found this and the sequel from a comment on AO3 to your Yankee Swap story. I’m Beryl4 over there.

Soooo cute. Love it.

Y'know, I had putting off reading this story but I am so glad I finally did. It's brilliant! It's everything I want in a Mirandy and so much more

Hilarious from start to finish. Good idea to use Caroline's point of view. Wasn't too sure where Cassidy was at end end, was soccer camp still going? So cute how Caroline saw some of their more intimate moments.

love it thanks more fics pretty please

Loved it, as always. I really adore your writing; your sense of timing, the idea of the story, the choice of words, the romance and how it is realist :-)

Great story!

I love this short but beautifully rounded view from Caroline's POV which shows how hard it is to be in the shadow of such a powerful figure as Miranda. It may not have been honest but I think you showed perfectly the spot she felt she was in and why she felt the need to go undercover. Also Andy was not fooled by it and it all turned out well in the end fo them all.

That was such a clever way to also show Miranda and Andy's vocal reunion also through Caroline's eyes or rather ears! Making us use our imagination is much more potent at times than reading it.

But I know you have written a companion piece to this and I hope you will post that here as well, as that is an illuminating alternative POV.

Thank you.

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I really enjoyed this story, from time to time I def enjoy reading about Mirandy from the girl(s) point of view. Its well written and you have a really good concept. I liked how your portrayal of Caroline is of a teen who has realized that she was a spoiled brat and has grown from that. Also that she has a passion that she wants to prove that she doesn't need her moms help to succeed.

On another note, if you ever feel the urge to re-tell this story through Miranda or Andy's point of view you would have at least one reader that's for sure.

Keep up the good work!

LOVED this Caroline POV story. Very unique and well done.