OH MY GOSH
This is Amazing XD
I like your old one and of course, this one also. I'm really good at English so Im sorry ._.

GREAT STORY! I love it too! XD

Please continue :))

i like it... keep it up hehe XD

Okay, I'm gonna try to give a good review here.
Er...Mah...Gerd...Dark, emotional, and just...asdfghjkl; Can I have your talent? Please?

Oh boy. I sense a lot of dark things coming from this re-write...

On the other hand, symbolism and metaphors, woohoo, love that sort of thing.

Poor Philia. I loved your first story, and I'm really looking forward to this one. I hope to see more soon.