Beautifully done. Great read.

:) cool

Really enjoyed the story, good idea for a crossover and really sweet. Gotta say there are a lot of mistakes though:

Juno's name is MacGuff, not MacGruff. Her mom left when she was five and Juno is pretty pissed at her so it's unlikely she remembers devilled eggs or would bring it up. Fingers slide along to frets or feasibly to chords; tab is a type of notation, the equivalent to staff notation. Absent is not a measure of time (although this might be an autocorrect). A person is observant, not observational. Vouch means confirm that something is true, or that someone is who they say they are, not opt or choose. It only takes 6.5 hours to fly from Boston to Portland non-stop. You can't relish *in* something, but you can revel in something or relish something.

Sorry i know i sound like a bitch, but they're simple mistakes that can be easily changed, and unless someone says something then you won't know any different.

Great job, I enjoyed immensely.

Well done. And that is a compliment greater than it may sound, because only when you've rendered people practically lost for words do those simple compliments come out. Well done.