Reviews for Phoenix
SortingHat chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Good story too short. Did you type this on a smart phone because the way it's grammar appears and the length suggests so. I never type on a smart phone as they will never replaced a good old keyboard and mouse.

In fact I always have wired mouses because wireless the batteries always go dead fast and they tend to be hard to control I think wireless easily get hacked.
BaconBabe chapter 10 . 3/16/2016
ok
Guest chapter 9 . 1/9/2015
Hi. Will you be continuing this story?
Dovahmiin chapter 9 . 4/11/2014
Please update soon! I can't wait to see the rest! Keep up, I'm begging you!
Guest chapter 8 . 1/10/2014
Please write more! I still don't know what the mark is.
kamiccolo's rose chapter 8 . 12/12/2013
It is very good, update soon!
Caladhiel999 chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
Ooooh! Things are getting really, really good!
BaconBabe chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
finally. i like this
DwarvenWarrior chapter 8 . 11/14/2013
Oh that was quite tense0.0 Amazing chapter though!
WriterGirl1198 chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
I absolutely love this story. Keep up the awesome work!
CherryTree230 chapter 7 . 9/14/2013
This was awesome! I have never thought of Azog taking just proves it is all the more genius! :)
Guest chapter 7 . 6/23/2013
good story can't wait for more
BaconBabe chapter 7 . 5/10/2013
i love it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
Ok rafikis a name from the lion king...a baboon and I just looked it up to see if it had another meaning. Check out urban dictionary. Gross
CammieBella chapter 7 . 5/2/2013
Love it! Please update?
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