You make a very valid point. Imprinting does not equate fairy tale ending.

I LOVE IT
I LOVE PAUL/BELLA
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ

Uh, yeah, continuing it would be a good idea. This leaves too many questions. :(

Such a sad chapter. This is a good start, but I would like to see that Paul does learn to change, that he does give Bella... and his baby... what they need. I hope he learns to work for her love, by showing it to her.

FYI - To help clean up the grammar/spelling, you could try finding a beta on Facebook group, Beta Babes and Grammar Gropers.

I really liked this. It would be amazing to see it expanded, my mind is spinning with ideas! If you continue it I will read it, if you want someone else to take a shot at it that would be great as well. Let me know, I would give it a chance.

You should continue as a story its amazing love it

It's really nice story :3 please please make another chapter

I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLZ

intense

This was so heartbreaking. I love the story. It really should not be a one-shot. I don't normally review only when I really love the story. And I can truly say that your story is wonderful. I really really hope you do continue.

More please

THIS SHOULD NOT BE A ONE-SHOT IT'S WAAAAAY TOO GOOD FOR THAT

UPDATEEE PLEASE

please continue this story, I really would love to see what happens!

please continue with the story

please continue this story this is a great beginning to a story and personally i would like to know if Paul gets Bella back.