| Reviews for Loss of Control |
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   Mukuro234 chapter 17 . 10/14/2019 This was awesome! |
| Moonlit-Ajisai chapter 5 . 12/12/2018 loving it so far, except... the broken spanish. please. stop. or at least put translations so we can understand. its a lot of work going back and forth between google translate to read a story. |
| aya.anezaki chapter 17 . 8/30/2018 i love happy ending... |
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 16 . 4/20/2017 I face-palmed so hard when I read the end of this chapter. Dang, you just had to go bring poor Harry into this. It was unabashedly hilarious and so much fun. Wait, does this mean that various other rulers of the afterlife, like Hades and Hela exist? |
| HikariKurayami88 chapter 16 . 7/16/2016 Overall awwww,but you could have totally expanded on some scenes like the last for example. I mean he is not the only one with brown eyes... -_- Still overall a very nice and quite refreshing (for me at least) story. It had it's cute, thrilling, exciting (in more ways than one ;D) moments. Language wise it is also very good. The only remark I have is that you focus too much on the pregnancies in the beginning and rush what else happens plot wise either in between the lemons or into that one I found chapter. I would have found it better if you had also elaborated on the conspiracy interspersed with what happens in real world/soul society... Ps. I totally didn't know I was rereading this story so when I tried posing this and it said I had already reviewed this chapter I was quite confused... such a doofus I am XD |
| Mumia0813 chapter 2 . 1/21/2016 *nosebleed* wow...0.0 *faints due to lack of blood* |
| countrylovinfangirl chapter 17 . 9/18/2015 Amazing! I love it a lot! Please continue soon! |
| DefendTheUndefended chapter 11 . 8/31/2015 I laughed for an hour on how Gin drugged Aizen...HILARIOUS! ROTFL! Awesome! |
| KatherineC1998 chapter 11 . 7/13/2015 HAHA~ XDD That ending! Im so done! -dies of uncontrolable laughter- |
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 6/30/2015 I like how you slowly worked into the idea of needing a powerful mate, with the discomfort and craving. |
| DarkTragedy chapter 16 . 5/11/2015 you killed it... it was good until it became a crossover there's nothing wrong with crossovers it was just a little too late in the story and I feel unnecessary. |
| angelaneahwalker chapter 17 . 1/6/2015 my favorite part, was when harry appeared...that was awesome... |
| aya -.- desu chapter 17 . 11/8/2014 Kyaaaaa... This is cool... What took you so long, aizen!? You make my baby boy cry! #huh? |
| HelleBelle chapter 16 . 9/12/2014 Well wasn't expecting to see Harry but hey it makes sense LOL |
| HelleBelle chapter 15 . 9/12/2014 I'm with Grimm on this one. What did just happen? |
