Reviews for Those in the Spiral
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
Silvereye-BW chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
Awesome story. Can't wait for more. Will Hinata like become a slave?
nightwind83 chapter 4 . 11/2/2014
Whybiys been far more then 20 days, need more
Roxie.88 chapter 4 . 4/16/2014
Ok did not see what hinata did coming at all. Ante go your story just get more interesting please please please update your story I know it's been over a year but it would be really awesome if you continued it!
Roxie.88 chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
Loved this chapter makes me wonder if naruto will become a badass sealer in the future? Hope so! It was nice to know what the uzumakis were feared for. Can't wait to read next chapter
Roxie.88 chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
This was a sad chapter for me but glad that he meet hinata. Look forward to reading the next chaoter
Roxie.88 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
This is awesome there are 2 nine tails! Like your story so far so I will continue I just hope you update all chapters soon!
chandu-itachi chapter 4 . 3/13/2014
Awesome story l like the way you used the different dimension concept but little confused abt what happened to kurama inside naruto . Plz update a good story should be at least finished..
Hikari Nova chapter 4 . 2/8/2014
when will this be updated?
NyxEclipse88 chapter 4 . 1/18/2014
This is AWESOME!
I mean really!
I'm so glad I found this. *sob
Meh I'm waiting for the next chapter...so hurry update!
:3
thestorymaker2 chapter 4 . 1/6/2014
Really interesting good idea love the fic
hiNAru Aburame chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
... O M G ._.
... just... wow, I didn't see this coming...
... just...
... Greetings... : ) ... : /
Dez Guardius chapter 4 . 8/13/2013
I get the feeling that things are going to get worse before they get better for Hinata, Ko, and Naruto. Hopefully, everything will work out in the end. Keep up the good work, and please take a look at my story Windows of the Soul Reloaded and review it. I'd like your critique [as a review (s)] of course.
Random Chick's Pen chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
Wow... Hinata... Just, WOW... You've earned my eternal respect! Sure you BLINDED yourself with you being from a clan that is KNOWN for their EYESIGHT and being the HEIRESS... I want to know more of your reasoning, but Kurama was right. What cruel, disgusting, and twisted world do we live in for a girl like you to blind yourself for someone who tortured your friend and nearly KILLED him as he enjoyed it? I really want to know your thoughts and opinions on that.
KIRABIIIII!
BR0TH3R MENACE chapter 4 . 8/9/2013
i can't believe u did that to hinata., but it isn't the worst thing i have read happen to her. good chapter though.
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