A Tremere neonate could throw a fireball with little or no trouble(two dots in Thuamaturgy at creation). So why would you expect a little lightning to be at all impressive, yes coming from a Sewer-Rat(with all do respect to Baba Yaga) that would be shocking, but not impossible. Yet these Brujah intantly think "Oh teh noes, its a Antediluvian".

Methusalah maybe, ancilae certainly, but never an Antediluvian.

i very well made fanfic, it must have taken you ages to come up with. well done

Hey

I know its along time since you completed this fic, but I'm still goning to write this to say how much I enjoyed it. I started reading all your parody's which completly cracked both me and my brother up, and then this was just fantastic.

Really, I love this story, especially Raz and Kain. their interaction is great. )

Gah...is this the end of your legacy and the beginning of Defiance? This seems to have a simlar beginning as the so-far last game of the series... I hope you do continue it, though! It would be interesting...ah...if an Archon or two, or Luna and the clans of his city...somehow strayed into Nosgoth. But that would create yet another paradox, ne?

I love your writing style, and the way you merged the two world sand the Vampiric cultures of both. Excellent! EXCELLENT! Muah... And I love your references to Gehenna (gah...obsession with that right now, i have. I watched Dawn of the Dead one too many times, and the NotLD series bears slight similarity to Gehenna).

Excellent writing, though! I'm surprised no Lupines made their way into the story. Then again, they usually don't trespass into Vampire territory unless they have a good reason or a good plan.

Hope to see more!

Before I continue to read, I must express my gratitude... Mehe, finally there is somebody who wrote about a connection between the vampires of Earth (I refuse to call it a game...I doubt it is) and the vampires of Nosgoth. I made a not once before that the vampire Malek reminded me of the Malkavian clan...Yep...

Sounds interesting. They think Kain is Caine? Mehe... And according to a book of angels I found, Raziel is a fallen angel. Yesh...

Kudos to you! *snugs*

great chapter

BloodofAngels:nice story,very addictive

Magnificent! A truly satisfying ending. Fast-paced action as ever, brilliantly written and plenty of food for thought in the plot too!

As to Raziel's fate - a masterstroke.

I just wish it wasn't over. :)

Look people, check the title and rundown of the work. Its over and done with. Now let's leave Crystarr alone so he can go onto something else. If anything, the ending of the this story is how the game LoK: Defiance is suppose to begin.

Whoa, whoa whoa! that can't be the last chapter!

You have to continue this thing with Raz and the Elder god! It looks to me the basis of another master piece!

YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL (or else)

good ending chapter. I was wondering how they'd ever be able to return to Nosgoth... really well-made fic, complex as well. How did you ever came up with it all?

There's gotta be a sequel coming! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! Great story. Need more though.

For some reason I think it's not over yet.

Sorry I didn't review earlier, but my computer was messed.

Please continue soon.

WAI! How could you do that to Raziel? *breathes* OK... OK... I'm calm... Anyways, sorry about that... Great story! I liked that "after all those calculations it all came down to 'Stab him'!" That was pretty funny! _ Good job! I commend you for your work! I give you... WATERMELONS! *laughs insanely*

:) And thus is is concluded...or is it? *dramatic music from a 50's horror flick flares to life* Never expected the sire to be the one in the end to be the host...thought it would be a Tremere. Meh, me still like!

And yes, now the story seems to pick up for LoK: Defiance. And another tale continues...

*goes off chanting Frenzy, Frenzy, Frenzy!*