the stories you write are good but a bit confusing. like you need to explain a bit better, edit your writing and you have to stop skipping scenes because im sure im not the only one getting lost. over all its a really well written story keep it up.

You made such a good story love it!

Regardless of its grammatical errors, it's a great story. It touched my heart, made it cry and made it happy. Good job.

oi way too fast! (still good but wayyyy too fast)

good story but you could have been better with the ending, but hey i'm not complaining

NO IT ENDED MAKE A SEQUAL PLEASE IT'S AMAZING DON'T END THE BEAUTIFULNESS!

Wow! What will happen next! I'm dying to know! UPDATE! !

Are there going to be more chapters cause this is getting intense

I love this chapter even though i cried because of it

Awesome story and update soon!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

I'm soo into your story! I love it! pls update it soon!

HIASHI YOU MOTHERF*****!