Kirito x sachi are better then kirito x asuna as a cupple

When u making chp 23?

Hey, I love this fic...
please, tell me that it's not dead!

fantastic!~!~~~

Izumi Misaki, just Another character.

Ducker, my favourite member of the Black Cats, is dead. This guy who always had a smile. This guy who loved to joke. This very confident guy. He is a real hero.

I really like it

So the story is dead? ;-;

Nice "how to train your dragon" reference there bud

yo no le hubiera dicho nada a asuna, hubiera dicho "disculpe pero preferimos mantener nuestra informacion personal en privado, dijo que el trato fue aceptado pues muchas gracias comandante, ¿kirito nos acompañas?"

I began to read this a few days ago and I'm enjoying myself. Bit on the long side, but I can work with it. It's very interesting a read and I'll recommend it to friends.

There's a little something that I noticed... if you correct it you would improve your writing greatly. You kind of overuse "..." both in dialogue and narration. Often a comma or period could do the job much better.

I really like the way you writing this fanfic, I hope that you will continue this masterpiece of a fiction. Too bad if its just end like this, because it's much better than the original storyline (for me anyway). I wanna see it, the ending where Sachi and Kirito both survived this game

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Great story, plot and everything! I hope u plan on continuing this story, it's amazing!