Really? The old "accidentally caught the attention of a plot-pushing character and is seen as a potential threat and so has to jump through hoops to avoid the nasty repercussions of merely being alive" trope. How disappointing, not merely because it's so overused, but more so because its very premise is so unrealistic.

Ah, great. Nothing like sparking interest with gender dysphoria, follow by gender bender.

Wait... Gender bent and never felt comfortable as a guy but still dazed and crushing on females. So if this is fem slash state so in you description. Im gonna stop reading here, not because ots fem slash [just give heads up] but because the longer this story goes on the more useless she becomes she was badass first couple chapters now she is kissing the bosses ass and has 'compassion' and 'good doer' feelings all of a sudden. Now she is going to be a bag vamp which is almost as boring as veg [animal] vamps. Her disassociation seems to have disappeared at drop of hat and is nows a blushing useless bag vamp. I was just expecting badass vamp that makes it on her own. Not be arias ass licker and passing out after trying to play hero when being so unstable. Plus she doesnt learn and keeps doing the same fighting.

Her caring so much for a lone asari enough to expose herself like such is killing this story for me. Then to just spill everything... So much for dissociation diagnosis or was that for convenience sake and now ur gonna make her a bleeding heart hero.

of to a decent start until the crappy gender bending shtick. I'm going to drop it but all the best with this.

so happy to see this again, will commence re-read at once, :)

well so far your character has fucked up every single fight she got into ... i have to wonder what the point of this story is if your character does not change and repeats the same thing over and over again ...

the "not fucking with aria" sentence comes up WAAAAY too often ... no one repeats themselfs that often ...

You know, you come off as super suspicious in this chapter, like how do you know who Aria is if you just woke up on Omega with no memory of how you got there? To an outside observer your super shifty.

ooo arias gonna kill em both

ugh. politics.

shits going down its nice to read this again try to update faster then a year

The worst thing here is the chapter end for obvious reasons... why did you stop writing? ._.

Thank you for the chapter ~

Really enjoyed this chapter, hope you will upload more when you finish them. Dont worry overly much about the wait - if any thing, a longer wait for a better chapter than a decrease in quality is prefered.

Nice job on this chapter!