Nice, great structure and a really cool idea! :DD

Loved it! Dialogue was fantastic, the descriptions were perfect and they were both so in-character!

Ooooh, delicious.

A lot of the Molly/Irene fics I've seen - you know, all /ten/ of them - are surprisingly fluffy, considering this fandom and that the pairing involves The Woman. So I'm doubly happy to see some porn!

Now, if you need me, I shall be in my bunk.

Fuck, you're good at this...