daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw damn this fic is so worst the read i loved it

Awesome! I was sad that it ended. You had me wanting more. Great job!

UPDATE. LIEK NOW.

I just wanted to say that I absolutely LOVE your writing style and this story. I was grinning and snickering through the entire thing. It was pretty cliché but in a completely make your heart gooey good way. I can't wait until you upload another story (hopefully another Dave x John).

AHGUOSUOGDGUIAGUIAGIKUKGUIDG KIYKGYIS IWASNY EXPWCTING THATG

That was beautiful. Just asdfidnhdk.
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My one criticism (for the next ones) is for there to be more dialogue between the characters/for them to have known each other longer/better. Still, it was a great job. You have successfully messed up my feels. I hope you're pleased, Author.