This review is kind of a mini-essay and is mostly a big rant so I apologize. Please note that while I am upset about the ending and certain plot points in the story, I am in no way trying to bash or torment the author. I think they are very talented and the story was written very well. The characters acted and spoke as they were designed to (for example Thor being much darker than in the MCU) and didn't do or say things that would have been entirely out of ordinary. Their changes (usually) were shown gradually. I loved the story in the beginning but it became too much when the threesomes involving Ingrid came to light. The knowledge of Thor letting Ingrid do that to his ”beloved’s” brother was too outrageous and then she just forgave him?! Especially after she had to get involved instead to save her brother. To me, Thor stopped being the alpha with a dark side and ventured into straight up monster territory. I still feel nauseous writing this. It just kept getting worse and worse after that. The last two chapters confused the hell out of me. They were so disjointed with the rest of the story. Chapter 37 or 38 (don’t remember exactly) was all about him trying to get Harmony’s forgiveness which seemed to be given too quickly after the slap outburst. I want the version where she lets him stew in his deserved isolation and make him suffer the way she had. He completely abandoned her and even hurt her! And then right when you think the next few chapters will be about their reconciliation and them finally getting their happy ending with just the two of them, the next chapter opens with some new chick being sent in to be Queen?! And only a few months later to boot (maybe I got the dates wrong but I thought it said it had been only months). You would think they would at least take a gap year to repair their relationship and get the therapy they both need by this point. The end of this chapter was okay (also did he marry Svana-sorry if I spelled that wrong-because Thor said he wouldn't marry anyone else but Harmony and if he did marry her then that would completely ruin it) because Svana is cool with the relationship so happy ending for our two lovers! Nope. Now we have another random threesome and a confusing ending with no build up and no love shown between the two people we all came to read this fanfiction about. We don't know anything about Svana, just some vague exposition spouted off about these great deeds she did and how she is so amazing. Without showing at least one or two of these deeds, all of the praise seems empty and exaggerated. I know she is written as a supposed ”savior” but i honestly don't like her because she is an unnecessary distraction from the love story we all actually care about. If she was to be important she should have either been introduced much earlier or the story should have been much longer. Having the threesome destroys the entire story as Thor and Harmony were supposed to be the lovers who were pulled apart by circumstance but always found their way back to each other. Thor was supposed to have loved her and only her. That was what he pledged before all hell broke lose and what he pledged before the last chapter. I'm all for polyamory (not my personal cup of tea but to each their own) but not when it destroys the plot. The ending overall seemed very rushed as if the author stopped caring about the story (I’m disappointed but not angry or anything. I get how it can be when you lose passion or interest in something you write) and plot development and just wanted to tie up as many loose ends up as possible and be done. It really is a shame because it is written very well and a chapter with Thor and Harmony just being together and reflecting (maybe old and gray) on their lives would have warmed my heart after all the puking and horror of the Ingrid section. I apologize for this essay review but I tend to ramble when I feel very strongly about something. Should the author read this, darling I think you are fantastic and while my rant may seem like I am just absolutely hating in you, I really am not. I naturally am very verbose and wordy so this gist is; while I think your story was written very well and the plot was very interesting (albeit a bit darker than my usual taste but that is nothing on you or your story at all), the ending was rather rushed and disappointing. I do want to read your other fics because are a great writer and I want to check out that other Thormony fic.

Oh no he loki Jr jr

I love loki in this story I also love theirs attitude its...different

I'm in love with this book already. And thank you been looking for a thor story

Lorika

Hi... I like this fantastic story, but I wanna see a balance in thors sexual life. How can he control not getting off with mo... I'm sure they are still not completely lovers, or they still dont know. I feel it's better if thor engages in his usual hookups for few years and slowly grow tired off random hookups and get more attached to mo.

Oh my god this chapter has me laying here bawling. The way you've written it instantly slammed me back to the days of my own crippling depression after I lost someone and I'm absolutely stunned at how deeply I'm feeling what both Thor and harmony are feeling.

...wow! I absolutely loved it! this is one of m favorite reads now. I wish that they had found a way for harmony and Thor to have a baby without it hurting her during birth or something but it was still amazing. there were a few parts that I wasn't fond of, but who would be? the heart wrenching moments where he accidentally lost himself, especially after the deaths of Queen and baby, but wow...I can't explain how amazing this was. amazing job!

Even though I am kinda late to reading this story, I loved the beginning but tbh over time it went downhill.

This story started out so good, but I think you wanted to expand on so much and then rushed to end it. The ending was very disappointing sadly, nonetheless, a great start.

I felt like the ending was a bit incongruous with the rest of the story... there was little to no build-up, it would have been far more impactful if you showed ANY of the build up between the 3 of them, no to mention the audience cannot get a sense for how the relationship functions, because we never see all of them together. Additionally, I feel as though the idea of the God's Bond was built up, then discarded without explanation. It was a major point earlier in the story, so I don't understand how it led to nothing. I loved your story... until it stopped feeling like you did. The end was devoid of your previous passion for the narrative, and it's especially evident in the loose ends you didn't care to explain.

This is my favorite all time story of any fan fiction stories I have read and I'm glad you completed it. Thank you . That being said I do have to say that it started out awesome I couldn't put it down, every time I saw a new update my heart would race while I read it. Up until the last few chapters and then I felt like you lost focus on this story and didn't want to disappoint us and wrote an ending that was ok compared to the rest of the story. I felt you had other plans at one time for this story and then you started that other project and lost the zeal in writting this story. Which is a real shame. Because like I said this story was the best I was reading at one time and for thoughs chapters THANK YOU. I only wish you would have stuck to that passion your had mostly through is story.

Ahhh awesome ending. So sad it is over but glad it is as well. Perfect ending to a perfect story! Can't wait for your other stories you may write! :)

this story was simply amazing and I would like to say congrats on writing such a captivating tale. thank you, author.

I read this chapter yesterday, as soon as I received the alert but I could not write a comment, I was too sad. I love this story so much !
I'm happy that the end is happy, but a little disappointed that you did not show Harmony and Thor together (even if the Queen is friendly...)
I thank you for writing this beautiful fiction which is in my favorites.
Good continuation !