Reviews for New Ayumu and Hiyono
KvFrZ chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
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Guest chapter 22 . 3/20/2016
whats next?im getting sick! wait,let me give you a sickish idea:
after that situation,ayumu triedto talk with hiyono but one evening he came home very he was very ill... hiyono became so worrier that she served and took care of him for the whole night and the next 3 blade children came to see him and somehow takashi got that information. he was soooo jeasous.#(im so exited)#.and then...
hgcrnhfvtb chapter 22 . 3/19/2016
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Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
hey why doesn't Ayumu and Hiyono date then...
I thought at the end they Start love and they live happily with the blade children protecting them from the hunters ... Why why doesn't it end like that D;
anonymous chapter 22 . 7/30/2014
it's good :) I hope you write more though...
I love hiyono's positive side,hehe..
SakuraLuck chapter 18 . 7/15/2014
Wait aren't Kouseke and Ryouko siblings?
SakuraLuck chapter 10 . 7/14/2014
too cheesy n embarrasin
catherine.madridista chapter 22 . 6/1/2014
I really love what you write and I also enjoy it thanks a log
When will the next chapter come out am really looking forward to read it
lunapyon chapter 11 . 4/23/2014
Hahaha. Narumi's so funny. xDD
lunapyon chapter 8 . 4/23/2014
Waaa. Best fanfiction of Spiral I've ever read. :D
IarIz chapter 22 . 12/29/2013
No next chapter ... Need more ... Will you finish this ...
guest chapter 22 . 10/13/2013
This is a really different take on the characters personality but I like it. Please update!
clare chapter 22 . 7/23/2013
Ok I am not sure if my reviews are showing up cause I am not signed into fanfic but please update with a longer chapter!
clare chapter 22 . 7/22/2013
Thanks for the update! please update soon with a really long chapter
Clare chapter 21 . 7/7/2013
Update please!
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