| Reviews for New Ayumu and Hiyono |
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KvFrZ chapter 1 . 9/2/2018 Veri n1c3cKLst0riXx |
Guest chapter 22 . 3/20/2016 whats next?im getting sick! wait,let me give you a sickish idea: after that situation,ayumu triedto talk with hiyono but one evening he came home very he was very ill... hiyono became so worrier that she served and took care of him for the whole night and the next 3 blade children came to see him and somehow takashi got that information. he was soooo jeasous.#(im so exited)#.and then... |
hgcrnhfvtb chapter 22 . 3/19/2016 . |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2014 hey why doesn't Ayumu and Hiyono date then... I thought at the end they Start love and they live happily with the blade children protecting them from the hunters ... Why why doesn't it end like that D; |
anonymous chapter 22 . 7/30/2014 it's good :) I hope you write more though... I love hiyono's positive side,hehe.. |
SakuraLuck chapter 18 . 7/15/2014 Wait aren't Kouseke and Ryouko siblings? |
SakuraLuck chapter 10 . 7/14/2014 too cheesy n embarrasin |
catherine.madridista chapter 22 . 6/1/2014 I really love what you write and I also enjoy it thanks a log When will the next chapter come out am really looking forward to read it |
lunapyon chapter 11 . 4/23/2014 Hahaha. Narumi's so funny. xDD |
lunapyon chapter 8 . 4/23/2014 Waaa. Best fanfiction of Spiral I've ever read. :D |
IarIz chapter 22 . 12/29/2013 No next chapter ... Need more ... Will you finish this ... |
guest chapter 22 . 10/13/2013 This is a really different take on the characters personality but I like it. Please update! |
clare chapter 22 . 7/23/2013 Ok I am not sure if my reviews are showing up cause I am not signed into fanfic but please update with a longer chapter! |
clare chapter 22 . 7/22/2013 Thanks for the update! please update soon with a really long chapter |
Clare chapter 21 . 7/7/2013 Update please! |