Reviews for Revised: Ambivalence
KaiJoe-kj chapter 21 . 7/14
was Kaiba being possessive and jealous or I'm start to imagine things?
KaiJoe-kj chapter 32 . 7/14
Tbh, I can't handle the fact of Kaiba being uke. End of story. i really can live on cheese Burger and fries only SNFKFKEHDKOFKDHSLQHWLFBBFJFKWBWLANZHFJDJDHSBSJSB THIS IS REALLY AMAZING STOOORRYYYYYYYY IT'S DESERVE EVERY HOUR I SPENT ON IT! REALLY THANK YOU AW.
KaiJoe-kj chapter 13 . 7/14
I'm proud of my kings; they finally did it I really really thank you AW, and i want so badly to show you how much i loved your story. I know every writer—even if they don't show that– likes their hard work to be appreciated, but seriously i don't know how to do that at fanfiction since I'm wattpad user and such; there we could comment at every paragraph to show the writer how much we love their story and appreciate their hard efforts, i don't think that one review is enough, hell your chapters are longer than me, they and you are deserve more.
KaiJoe-kj chapter 10 . 7/14
I'm gonna skip the fish market part.. I hate fishes and everything about them just make me want to throw up XD
KaiJoe-kj chapter 11 . 7/14
the dumbest thing you might do in your life is talking to a sleeping person, especially if they were like Kaiba Does Joey too much cute when he apologizes or it's just my mind?
KaiJoe-kj chapter 12 . 7/14
I'm not supposed to like Kitamura kindness and sweet character– hell I'm loyal fangirl for KaiJoe
KaiJoe-kj chapter 12 . 7/14
I'm not supposed to like Kitamura kindness and sweet character– hell I'm loyal fangirl for KaiJoe
KaiJoe-kj chapter 13 . 7/14
I'm proud of my kings; they finally did it I really really thank you AW, and i want so badly to show you how much i loved your story. I know every writer—even if they don't show that– likes their hard work to be appreciated, but seriously i don't know how to do that at fanfiction since I'm wattpad user and such; there we could comment at every paragraph to show the writer how much we love their story and appreciate their hard efforts, i don't think that one review is enough, hell your chapters are longer than me, they and you are deserve more.
KaiJoe-kj chapter 11 . 7/14
the dumbest thing you might do in your life is talking to a sleeping person, especially if they were like Kaiba Does Joey too much cute when he apologizes or it's just my mind?
KaiJoe-kj chapter 1 . 7/14
This beginning won my heart, i do love your writing style and the details in, seriously it made my stomach drop too many times and i feel everything the character have felt, really thank you for your efforts!
KaiJoe-kj chapter 2 . 7/14
OMG! I'M SHOCKED! DID HE JUST REFUSES TO HELP OTOGI'S CORPORATION XD! Man he's really badass like that lol.
also i might write more than one review at every chapter, I'm too used to do so in Wattpad appbut really that app is good; it's allowed you to comment at every paragraph Tbh, i thought Jou would put more of some sort of fight against Kaiba's ignore and indifferent about Mokuba and he I really really love the way Jounouchi getting easily angry in XD dammit the virtual world of Kaiba is just amazing! Seriously Kaiba done nothing?
KaiJoe-kj chapter 9 . 7/14
IT WAS A FUCKING WET DREAM!? I can't believe you T-T..
serena.jones.585 chapter 32 . 6/28
Oh my God, now all I can think of is The Pleasure Chest in Georgetown back in the 80s! That place was amazing! Readers, if you have never been to an adult toy store, you need to go! Too much fun. Thank you Jou for taking Seto. Glad to see a deeper relationship developing here. Jou still needs to come to terms with his own self worth.
KylieMrgan1 chapter 1 . 5/18
I read this story years and years ago and was heart broken when it just ended. These additional few chapters have been amazing. I feel so emotionally invested in your writing and the presentation of the characters. Please please tell me there is more to read somewhere or there will be soon? Continue your amazing work.
Kayli2509 chapter 31 . 10/4/2019
I am so glad you are updating this again. Can't wait for chapter forty one.
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