I like what you're doing and how you are not forgetting naru. Thanks for sharing.

Oh man! Ikuko! What does this mean?!

I REALLY like how you’re giving everything your own spin, with the spirits and all, while still sticking with the general idea of the stories. And it’s so good to see Mercury!

Oh, Moonshadow has me curious!

Oh, I like this! I love how she became a shrine maiden and is working with Rei, but drawing on the power of, I assume, the silver crystal so soon...now the question is does she forget? I’ll have to keep reading!

Easily THE best Sailor Moon fanfic I have ever read. I started and finished this over the last week, couldn't stop. Such great characterization and imaginativeness, I feel like I've learned so much. And the characters' voices are perfect! as is the plotting and secrecy. I do hope this continues because I absolutely love it so far!

Well, this was certainly an exciting chapter! I can see you're making the fight scenes a lot longer and more action-packed than in the original anime. Is there any particular reason why you had the youma replace one of the helpers at the jewelry store instead of Naru's mom? Also, at one point near the end, it says "install" where it should say "instill".

nice

I just want to give Naru all the hugs.

Oh, Naru... you are delving into forces you can't begin to truly comprehend. Also, I don't think Usagi went out to the movies.

Oh snap, I did not see this coming and had no idea how much I needed this chapter, but I did because it is amazing, kudos!

I love the focus you're giving Naru in general, showing real, noticeable impact for not just the monster attacks through her current mission and the narration/descriptions that show she is not entirely over it, but also the impact seemingly losing Usagi is having on her. Naru's pain, and guilt are balanced fantastically and her investment in Usagi's well being is deep and fascinating.

Mayumi seems quite checked out, some part of me wonders if there is more to it than that, especially given her timing.

Naru's research, oh my gosh her research, this was incredible on so many levels. OK first just the descriptions of the magic and her spell were fantastic!

But what's more is how Naru is investigating, it feels so real in the hurdles she's facing, difficult accessing the deepweb, but when combined with her personal, live experience proves enough for her to make an incredibly and terrifying breakthrough. Her expectations VS what she got, along with the framing and descriptions were powerful, kudos!

I also loved her reasons, feeling she has to protect Usagi, oh my oh dear and with that ending its only going to sting more, and the historical world building for summoners, and the final gut punch ending was all just, wow.

Brilliant work, this gave so much in so little time, I cam eager to see what comes next, good luck!

Oooooh! New chapter!
Naru’s getting curious~!
Now, call me a guttermind, but this line here: “She could feel the tension in her skin. She knew what would get rid of it, but she hadn't had a chance to do it for a few days...”
Has some connotations that are more than a little bit lewd, xD
*ahem* anyways, when can we expect the next installment in the Gamesverse series? I can’t wait to see what you do with StrikerS!

I wonder how much of that is Dark Kingdom Youma, or mixed-breeds like Rei.

this is a great story and i have really enjoyed reading it. I can't wait to read the next update.

This story is fantastic. It's paced incredibly well, and you give all the characters the right amount of spotlight. The flavour of the AU really adds a sense of weight to everything, and you do a great job of showing how difficult it would be to be in the Senshi's positions. I will eagerly await more!