okay, teah I getcha I was dealing with an Allegiant hangover too (why did she have to die!:()

YAY! a girl and a boy! mini Florence and Uriah!

Wow Monic is totally crazy! anger issues, i kinda fell bad for her actually no she is a stuck up pansycacke! i think her and Peter would be good for each other cause there both evil conniving a holes!

what! its totally Monic the maniac!

miscarriageeeeeeeee

Sad face x infinity

I really like this story, minor spelling errors but other than that it's super good

Great chapter.

I liked the chapter.

Lobed it one of my favrites

Tobias watched tris sleep Edward Cullen much

I would like to say I was very much enjoying that story so even if no one else liked it , I did

I really sorry if this sounds rude and I don't mean to sound like I am critisising you but the story is tricky to understand because you keep getting he and she or her and him onetime it was him instead of she can you try and fix that please .
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Love this story! Keep it up! Great Writing too!

I'm sure this is a good story, but I'm afraid I won't be reading it because of the errors I see in only the first chapter. Yes, I do care about grammar, and spelling, and capitalization because it makes the reading more clear and easier to follow. Try to fix that in the future; it can really be a turn off for some readers.